Half Melted Snow a Falling

A winter's splendor spoiled

o'er the yonder peaks

the snow half formed

falls on the heads

of those most bored

in the form of water,

10,000 feet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 18, 2010 at 3:58 PM
enjoyed, congrats on the featured poem, much sucess to you!
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February 17, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Michael, Congratulations on your poem feature this week. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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February 15, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Michael, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James
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February 15, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol
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December 5, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Those on the bottom looking up or those on top looking down wanting to ski? Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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November 28, 2009 at 1:36 PM
again welcome!
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November 24, 2009 at 2:44 PM
im loving your creative writes..welcome to the soup--Charma;)
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November 23, 2009 at 5:10 PM
great poem, thanks for sharing and welcome to the poetry soup!! keep sharing with us here!!:)
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