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Half Felt

I felt you that night more clearly than any wound the tears i bled from the things we said it made even the angels swoon i felt inside something not there something about you didn't seem to care have i failed you once too many times is that why i am unforgiven of these unsaid crimes i felt like i never had before and for that i am so sorry i didn't mean to make you feel something i tell you i'll be fine, so don't worry it was just a half finished song i wanted to sing but days go by and dreams die devils can sigh and lifeless things cry i never meant to hurt myself i never meant to lie i walked away from you so you wouldn't know why i loved and felt things not meant to be had stories don't end this way, they aren't supposed to be sad half felt and half undone i'm afraid the sad story has only yet begun

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Date: 1/6/2011 11:10:00 AM
You made me cry. i love this poem. Love Bree
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