half and half

A wet Robin
Argues with the chilled worms
Dutch Treat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lane Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 5:52 AM
The early bird really does catch the worm. Sweet write, John.
Rodgers Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 5:33 AM
Hello John, I needed a nice smile and chuckle today and your poem easily did it. I loved the Senryu! - Blessings, Daniel
Wolf Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 8:46 PM
The Debate of the Century, John. Bring Mr. Robin on! :) gw
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April 18, 2024 at 8:08 PM
This is a pretty picture with a little humor. It's so nice.
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