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Half Alive

Eyes open heavily slowly reluctantly each time. All I see is darkness. I stumble backandforth through the thick clouds of fog that surround me I melt into a soft corner farthest away from everything.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/11/2012 6:09:00 AM
My favorite things to read, are things I can relate to, it just "captures" me in the middle of reading. Such as this. =) Great Work.
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