Half Alive

Eyes open
heavily
slowly
reluctantly
each time.

All I see
is darkness.

I stumble
backandforth
through the thick clouds
of fog
that surround me

I melt 
into a soft corner
farthest away
from everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Jefferson Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 6:09 AM
My favorite things to read, are things I can relate to, it just "captures" me in the middle of reading. Such as this. =) Great Work.
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