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Half a Loaf

A cup of tea half-hot, half-cold doesn't sit well with me A loaf of bread half-dough, half-baked instant tummy ache A couple of buns one firm and round the other shunned

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2023 3:25:00 PM

Half laughing, half guffawing gw. :) laf

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/27/2023 7:44:00 PM

Half ooohing; half Ow!-ing! ~ Half-Brain

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/26/2023 1:11:00 PM

Sounds like fat shaming to me, GW

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:23:00 PM

Hmm. Hadn't seen that. Thanks for providing me a different angle on this one for me. ~ Blinders On, Now Off

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/26/2023 8:31:00 AM

LOL. Unique poem I am a half and half person. Like with coffee,I drink it half cold, Unless…topped with a dollop of whipped crea, a habit I picked up in San Francisco. Yummy.. Pangie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/26/2023 7:23:00 PM

No kidding! Interesting! ~ Half-here