Half a Heart

They met on a blue hill,
held hands past d mill,
drunk in love.
intoxicated, he smiles at d sky,
the guy with half a heart.

waking in the misty morning
outside the window was no sun
his love was no more,
no where to be found,
the only lily in his garden.

trekked to the moon,
swept the desert,
seeking his heartbeat.

she made his puzzles complete
his otherself, other life.
emotionally handicap,
he remains a guy with a half heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/12/2016 8:22:00 AM
Fill your heart with new art. Congrat .
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Date: 1/13/2016 12:53:00 PM
tanks ovidiu
Date: 1/11/2016 8:14:00 AM
With half a heart....... Aren't we all Well crafted, LL!! Hope to see you write again
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Date: 1/11/2016 10:28:00 AM
we re..but wen we lose a lover, we become emotionally incomplete.
Date: 1/11/2016 2:33:00 AM
i like it legendary
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Legendary Legend
Date: 1/11/2016 10:28:00 AM
tanks francis
Date: 1/10/2016 5:26:00 PM
complex relationships sometimes slip, before the glue does set a bit...sadly
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:20:00 AM
yes Don. a sincere relationship dat does not last is always painful.....tanks for stoping by.
Date: 1/10/2016 1:49:00 PM
hope he finds that other half soon, else he's gonna dissolve in history, excellent write there
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:21:00 AM
tanks alot sage
Date: 1/10/2016 12:49:00 PM
No question a love lost cuts our heart in half, dear friend! Poignant!
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:21:00 AM
tanks dear
Date: 1/10/2016 11:52:00 AM
Deprived of love the heart stays incomplete, yearning for what could have been after having had a taste of it. Sad! // paul
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:24:00 AM
tanks for stopping by.......love sometimes can be sore.
Date: 1/10/2016 11:52:00 AM
A nicely written verse...
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:24:00 AM
tanks alot
Date: 1/10/2016 10:23:00 AM
This is so beautiful and capturing , I'm mesmerized by this lovely poem my dear , hugs / / :)
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:22:00 AM
tanks alot. i appreciate.
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