Half a Buzz

Like a one winged fly he circled life... helplessly hopeful
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Willason Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 7:37 PM
Gets the mind doing mental gymnastics...a clever piece, enjoyed
Rodgers Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Hello John, what a thought provoking Monoku that still has me thinking about that poor fly or poor guy. - Blessings, Daniel
Baker Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 4:37 PM
Nice monoku, John. If you think much about life, we're all a bit like that their fly. Have a great day, my friend. Bill
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