Half a Buzz

Like a one winged fly he circled life... helplessly hopeful

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Paul Willason

Date: 2/1/2024 7:37:00 PM

Gets the mind doing mental gymnastics...a clever piece, enjoyed

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/1/2024 5:39:00 PM

Hello John, what a thought provoking Monoku that still has me thinking about that poor fly or poor guy. - Blessings, Daniel

Bill Baker

Date: 2/1/2024 4:37:00 PM

Nice monoku, John. If you think much about life, we're all a bit like that their fly. Have a great day, my friend. Bill

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/1/2024 9:19:00 AM

Without wishing to invoke comment tag, I did find this endearing.. imagined the bugs in the bar in A Bugs Life, down but not out :)

Tom Woody
Date: 2/1/2024 3:43:00 PM

I luv bugz!