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Half a bite

Fright In love is vain, I dreaded to be a memory. My Fall was tranquil, her Smile impeccable, it rendered me poignant. Too stoned to worship her imperfections a statue I became.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/25/2024 11:30:00 PM

A great reflection on our memories. We should not be afraid of them, but use them as stepping stones for a better life.

Tonye George
Date: 5/4/2024 5:48:00 AM

Yes, dear. Very true Victor. Thank you.

Ricky Muse

Date: 3/29/2024 7:02:00 AM

Lovely. So aesthetic. Thanks for sharing.................peace!

Tonye George
Date: 3/29/2024 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Ricky.

Silent One

Date: 3/25/2024 12:49:00 PM

I think we all dread to be a memory, but such is the ego of humanity that we fade away for so many, some we do not care for, but there is always that one person we never wanted to be forgotten by them....

Tonye George
Date: 3/25/2024 1:10:00 PM

There's always that one person. But sometimes I really don't wanna try if they'll only be but a memory. Don't want to think about someone else when I'm with another, or spend my life wishing i could erase the memories. So I don't even try anymore. Lovely insight Silent.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/24/2024 6:23:00 PM

Dear Tonye, I love how you wonderfully encapsulate the bittersweet essence of love and longing. The contrast between fear and desire, tranquility and poignancy, is palpable in your words. I liked your imagery of being too stoned to fully embrace imperfections is filled with the complexities of human emotions. It's a great reflection on vulnerability and the struggle to reconcile our feelings. Tonye, this is an evocative piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Tonye George
Date: 3/24/2024 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Daniel.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/24/2024 12:30:00 PM

Half a bite of Tonye's poetry constitutes a full meal, every time. I am many a poor lass' memory, I fear

Tonye George
Date: 3/24/2024 12:51:00 PM

Lol, Tom. Hope you're full? Thank you.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/24/2024 9:08:00 AM

“ a statue i became” ah how deep is that dear tonye, whether short or long whatever you write, i feel the emotions and sincerity of your voice emanating from your well articulated lines. “ i dreaded to be a memory” a feeling i think many can resonate with too. Loved reading this. Sending you light always

Tonye George
Date: 3/24/2024 12:51:00 PM

Thank you love. Hope your new week is great.