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You said...It's over, said and done My love no longer is the one You're more concerned how the judge Divides up the parts Which half do you want Of my old broken heart I know you're seeking custody Of every little thing but me And since you won't be around When I fall apart Which half do you want Of my old broken heart The only... thing left to decide Is the better half....yours or mine I know our love is history But you deserve your share of memories How about a little gift from me For your brand new start Which half do you want Of my old broken heart Protected by copyright All rights reserved

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Date: 2/28/2018 9:06:00 AM
Hi Chuck. Sad lines, especially the repeated question, which half do you want of my old broken heart.
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/28/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Becca! Are things better?
Date: 2/11/2018 9:00:00 PM
A clever depiction of split .. loved the line about splitting half of broken heart..good work Chuck.
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 2/16/2018 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! Always appreciate and value your comments!

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