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Written: October 3rd, 2023 "Man is graced as he loves, and love never fails. This river will lead life to its afar haven, where they can relish halcyon days and starry nights." By Poet ___________________________________________________________ Palmy trees swing in an idyllic sway An utopian demesne of a pacific day, A cheerful golden haze opines the fray In quiet times, quixotic people stay. Halcyon is an avatar in a mythic tale Upon the sumptuous settlement of scale, Provides a tranquil, timeless charm To this delightful and tranquil farm. Harmony and empyrean poise the spirit In silence, the tide slows without limit, In happiness, birds buzz and sing, A balmy nexus around serene swings.   In a sunlit setting, silence still lulls. It strips any slots and succors its hulls. Be at ease, pacific, sedate, and quiescent. Silence prevails, ariose and fluorescent. Tranquility reigns with composure and hush. Pacification whispers. No need to rush. Unleash the worries; calm will imply In peaceful quietude, solace will descry. Quietly, the halcyon beings dwell, In this serene and tranquil spell. Pacifying breeze and calming sea, Bestow a brain of blithe and believability. Delectation, demureness, dependability Decry mind vastness in this idyllic reality Mollify the restless soul, taciturn, and bestill. Heal inner stress and serenity with a chill. Lackadaisical in the thick night, with no voice, Allow peace whispers, fly, and sedate choice. Relieve the anxious heart, restore peace, After a serene start, never let calmness cease.

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Date: 10/20/2023 1:03:00 PM
Sotto, excellent and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your image, music and quote, Constance
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Date: 10/12/2023 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing write. Your pen was working over time on this one. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 10/7/2023 6:55:00 AM
As always brilliant rhymes, brilliant alliterations, brilliant diction, and so much depth in every line you’ve articulated here in such a profound and moving manner. Love the flow and the way you’ve also written about, tranquility and silence and how that fits the word halcyon here is impressive and impressive! You know how to get a reader be in awe of the artistry you present always! A skilled and gifted poet you are and yes “ unleash the worries and let calm to walk in” pleasure reading you
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Date: 10/4/2023 8:34:00 AM
Halcyon is one of my favorite words, and I rarely see it used. You used it beautifully, Sotto! Your alliteration is outstanding, and I particularly liked this verse: Tranquility reigns withcomposure and hush. Pacification whispers. No need to rush. Unleash the worries; calm will imply In peaceful quietude, solace will descry. After reading your poem I felt peaceful. Thank you for that. Have a pleasant day, Sara
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Date: 10/4/2023 8:26:00 AM
- "Harmony and empyrean poise the spirit In silence, the tide slows without limit" ... sounds beautiful and peaceful ... a wonderful poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/4/2023 8:18:00 AM
Fine use of alliteration. Great argument. perfect ideas as we all nee peace of mind. Blessings.
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