Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

Hairs of My Head

In God's word we are told 
From the prophets of old
That even the hairs
On our head are numbered
What an awesome being

That would care enough
To know when I grow old
As the hairs begins to fall
Keep tract of the fact

That even the hairs 
Of my head are numbered
That means for you
Yours are numbered too

(I can't even keep count of the ones falling out.)(Idea from the "Bible" Matthew 
10:30.) Maybe free verse tell me if  I am wrong.

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet September 29, 2009 at 1:32 PM Such true words a great read.Really enjoyed it.Teresa

Diane Christian September 22, 2009 at 3:41 AM a great poem Sarah, it is true he knows every thing about us and loves us much, my son james was in a car crash last week and had a scratch to his leg of his seat belt and a bruise came up later on his chest of the seat belt but other than that he was fine, he came home from his real dads with every single hair strand still in tact, how great is that and the car has had to be written off but james remains unhurt, God bless you from diane

Jared Pickett September 21, 2009 at 7:26 PM Another good write from an awesome writer.... Brilliance is hard to come by.....:JP]

Doris Culverhouse September 21, 2009 at 12:52 PM nicely penned mom, sorry I missed lunch I just couldn't make it.

Doresa Moore September 21, 2009 at 11:00 AM i love this poem keep writing please

Jimmy Anderson September 21, 2009 at 8:30 AM Thank you for the comments on my postings. I'm incarcerated looking to get my "name" out there in the poetry world. It's a huge passion. A powerful way to express oneself. My best friend mediates for me since I am currently incarcerated. Thanks again for telling others about my work. Jimmy

Gert W. Knop September 21, 2009 at 8:02 AM Thank you for your comment, Sara. Now I feel easier. Yes, l do know that problem. Isn't it a pity sometimes that things change. Loss of hair is just one of it. Keep on writing! Gert

Gert W. Knop September 21, 2009 at 7:15 AM Should be free verse, Sara. Why are you losing hair? Are you sick? And if so, I do cross fingers that everything will turn out good for you. Thank you for your hearty comment on "Out of the Blue". Pls comment also my poem "So far". Keep on writing! Gaert