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Hairs of My Head

In God's word we are told From the prophets of old That even the hairs On our head are numbered What an awesome being That would care enough To know when I grow old As the hairs begins to fall Keep tract of the fact That even the hairs Of my head are numbered That means for you Yours are numbered too (I can't even keep count of the ones falling out.)(Idea from the "Bible" Matthew 10:30.) Maybe free verse tell me if I am wrong.

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Date: 9/29/2009 1:32:00 PM
Such true words a great read.Really enjoyed it.Teresa
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:41:00 AM
a great poem Sarah, it is true he knows every thing about us and loves us much, my son james was in a car crash last week and had a scratch to his leg of his seat belt and a bruise came up later on his chest of the seat belt but other than that he was fine, he came home from his real dads with every single hair strand still in tact, how great is that and the car has had to be written off but james remains unhurt, God bless you from diane
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Date: 9/21/2009 7:26:00 PM
Another good write from an awesome writer.... Brilliance is hard to come by.....:JP]
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Date: 9/21/2009 12:52:00 PM
nicely penned mom, sorry I missed lunch I just couldn't make it.
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Date: 9/21/2009 11:00:00 AM
i love this poem keep writing please
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Date: 9/21/2009 8:30:00 AM
Thank you for the comments on my postings. I'm incarcerated looking to get my "name" out there in the poetry world. It's a huge passion. A powerful way to express oneself. My best friend mediates for me since I am currently incarcerated. Thanks again for telling others about my work. Jimmy
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Date: 9/21/2009 8:02:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, Sara. Now I feel easier. Yes, l do know that problem. Isn't it a pity sometimes that things change. Loss of hair is just one of it. Keep on writing! Gert
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Date: 9/21/2009 7:15:00 AM
Should be free verse, Sara. Why are you losing hair? Are you sick? And if so, I do cross fingers that everything will turn out good for you. Thank you for your hearty comment on "Out of the Blue". Pls comment also my poem "So far". Keep on writing! Gaert
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