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Haiku--Yellow Mustard



yellow mustard spills
across the green valley floor
black bird flaunts red wings

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March 22, 2011 at 6:29 PM

Creative use of color and other imagery for an interesting perspective. Enjoyed reading it today. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

March 17, 2011 at 9:01 AM

Lovely image of the mustard valley and the red-winged blackbirds. I don't think I have seen the species, dear LNC. Thank you for introducing them to me. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

March 16, 2011 at 10:26 PM

wow, this startles the senses, Barbara. WAs this sunlight or perhaps a newly blossomed patch of yellow flowers? In any event, I just love the way it contrast with the black bird. It's not for a contest, is it? Love it.

Brian Strand

March 16, 2011 at 12:08 PM

Still cutting it I see Barbarakvery colourful.Am fine have recently completed a ekphrasis/cartoon series on Vermeer(see www.vermeergirls.blogspot.com)continue with my daily pooem on twitter(@strandpoet)posting art on flickr(poiemapoet)and my essayette blogs and haiga on FB sadly PS is not so iphone friendly so only make short visits here.May yr creative inspiration flow.rgds BRIAN