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Haiku-Those Falling Leaves

hail pummels my door
autumn gives way to winter ...
path of burnished leaves



penned 26 Oct 2018

contest: haiku or senyru.

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Chris Hagy

November 8, 2018 at 9:15 PM

Hi Seren :) Nice haiku :) I love the paths of leaves...too bad winter comes next! :0 Hope your doing well :) C.H.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 26, 2018 at 1:54 PM

- Yes, the winter is approaching ... we will have frost this weekend - A visit I do not look forward to - A excellent haiku - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

October 26, 2018 at 10:34 AM

Better call the neighbor .. excellent Seren

Seren Roberts

October 26, 2018 at 12:51 PM

lol Tim that's true. indeed we have had gross hailstones today temp is 8 with chill factor much lower. i tried to centre poem but couldnt so gave up lol