Haiku's In Love

Sea breeze honey breeze!
The companionship with you,
Always a candy...

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My shining apple,
Juicy lips like raspberry,
Please hold me, don't go...



Charles melody (lightning ink) © January 5th, 2011.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 3:28 PM
AWWW, this is so sweet, Charles!
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Good double Haiku..It also can be called a Choka..Very passionate work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 6:30 AM
thanks so much, i give God the glory for i am only a choosing vessel...
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Delightful Haikus, Charles.. Thanks for reading, "Soft Wind" and leaving those kind comments. I was soaring the day I wrote that so it came so effortlessly. : ) Always, Annalise
Babcock Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Food and candy now you have my interest. mom soup mail
Kopp Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Sweet
La France Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Lovely love " senryu's" Charles, a delight to read~~
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 6:00 AM
Passionate and juicy thoughts on love, Charles
Sweetheart Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 5:20 AM
YUMMY Lightening Ink... a true Haiku for Luv my friend... luv your comment on my blog.. your heart's pillow... what a lovely phrase.. maybe u could write a poem with these words... would be awesome Charles.. as only u can do .... let me know luv...Happy New Year!
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