Jack Jordan Poet Haiku

Haikus 54

Haikus 54
	
	parking lot romance
	soaking wet smoochy kisses
	far too many clothes
	
	a wet asphalt bed
	not in the Kama Sutra
	do it anyway


These were written for photo #1 in PD’s “Kissing in the Rain”
contest, but I missed the deadline. Oh well...

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Gerald Kithinji August 16, 2013 at 3:14 PM Just the mention of the Kama Sutra... Jack Jordan August 16, 2013 at 5:45 PM I agree... Jack

Poet Destroyer A July 12, 2013 at 11:06 PM Sorry, you missed the deadline... a fine kiss, for the folks in this haiku.... xox...PD Jack Jordan July 12, 2013 at 11:27 PM I'm sorry too. I'm more watchful now...

Timothy Hicks June 5, 2013 at 10:16 PM I think this would have done well, but happy you posted anyway. I felt many others were a bit too dramatic with descriptions while this one had a lighter touch that I find more appealing. Jack Jordan June 6, 2013 at 8:24 AM Thanks. To tell the truth I was surprised by the seriousness of the winning entries. I took the description of PD's contest to be humorous, but clearly many did not. Oh well... And so it is.

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2013 at 3:57 PM sorry you missed the wagon!! But you got some nice little poems out of it, my friend. Jack Jordan June 2, 2013 at 4:12 PM Thanks... I lost track of the deadline, but I did have a fine time writing these two.

Elai Cee June 1, 2013 at 9:24 AM Well, though u didn't reach the deadline for me it's very nice! great romance! ...keep safe always...,Elai Jack Jordan June 1, 2013 at 9:35 AM Thanks, Elai. I'll be more mindful next time.. Jack

Maria Kyriacou June 1, 2013 at 8:09 AM too graphic for my taste but I think you've achieved your goal good poem.

Donna Jones May 31, 2013 at 6:20 PM Well I loved them......and think they would have placed.... Jack Jordan May 31, 2013 at 10:12 PM Thanks. I had others in mind, but then I took the weekend off, and...