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Haikus 54

Haikus 54 parking lot romance soaking wet smoochy kisses far too many clothes a wet asphalt bed not in the Kama Sutra do it anyway These were written for photo #1 in PD’s “Kissing in the Rain” contest, but I missed the deadline. Oh well...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Gerald Kithinji
Date: 8/16/2013 3:14:00 PM
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Just the mention of the Kama Sutra...
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Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 5:45:00 PM
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I agree... Jack
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Date: 7/12/2013 11:06:00 PM
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Sorry, you missed the deadline... a fine kiss, for the folks in this haiku.... xox...PD
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:27:00 PM
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I'm sorry too. I'm more watchful now...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/5/2013 10:16:00 PM
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I think this would have done well, but happy you posted anyway. I felt many others were a bit too dramatic with descriptions while this one had a lighter touch that I find more appealing.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 6/6/2013 8:24:00 AM
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Thanks. To tell the truth I was surprised by the seriousness of the winning entries. I took the description of PD's contest to be humorous, but clearly many did not. Oh well... And so it is.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/2/2013 3:57:00 PM
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sorry you missed the wagon!! But you got some nice little poems out of it, my friend.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 6/2/2013 4:12:00 PM
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Thanks... I lost track of the deadline, but I did have a fine time writing these two.
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/1/2013 9:24:00 AM
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Well, though u didn't reach the deadline for me it's very nice! great romance! ...keep safe always...,Elai
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Jack Jordan
Date: 6/1/2013 9:35:00 AM
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Thanks, Elai. I'll be more mindful next time.. Jack
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Maria Kyriacou
Date: 6/1/2013 8:09:00 AM
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too graphic for my taste but I think you've achieved your goal good poem.
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Donna Jones
Date: 5/31/2013 6:20:00 PM
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Well I loved them......and think they would have placed....
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Jack Jordan
Date: 5/31/2013 10:12:00 PM
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Thanks. I had others in mind, but then I took the weekend off, and...

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