Haiku-Rolling In the Dough

rolling in the dough status quo I’m watching bread grow 5/3/5 Syllable Count Oct.10.2018 Baker's Dozen Poetry Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy Placed 2'nd
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Doll Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Brilliant haiku, WW. Congratulations on your win. Warm wishes~ Warren
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Back with congrats on your win in the contest with this haiku. Rarely have so few words revealed so many layers of meaning. Well-done ~ gw
Rose  Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:55 AM
Invite me in, if you don't it'll be a sin, congrats on your win, WW,
Nicole Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Yep! You are rolling in the dough now!! :) Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. Love and Bread. ~ Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Great win in the contest, WW. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Fun rhyme, WW - congrats on your podium win.
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations for your win WW ! :)
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October 14, 2018 at 10:34 AM
love this, ^^W^^ , congratulations on your win :)
Raven Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Hi John, good luck in the contest my friend. A wonderful Haiku from your pen. I have to stop stopping by these baking writes, I have no self-control. The Michelin man heads for the kitchen once more. Love the content John. A Haiku fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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October 11, 2018 at 9:06 AM
If you are Rolling in Dough, simply watching Bread grow??? Can I Roll too, watch the Dough grow.?? Lol. This is cute and clever. Your thoughts bring a smile my Warrior with Wings. :) Love and cooking dough. ~ Brandy
Kiser Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Short, sweet and to the point. That bread in the photo looks delicious, too. Great work here and good luck.
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October 10, 2018 at 6:36 PM
….and I noticed there was one slice missing from that bottom pic. Enjoy! Excellent and clever WW. Love-n-bread CM
Pett Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Brilliant, very cleverly written, good luck in contest my friend. :))
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 5:53 PM
cool Ku and I love that first picture!!
Watson Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 2:02 PM
A very clever play on words, WW.
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October 10, 2018 at 2:02 PM
- I think they are done now ..... I can smell the freshly baked bread .... very great done, W.W. :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Great one WW :) Have a nice day !
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Call me when its done. I'll bring my knife and fork and the gorgonzola. Love it,
Green Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 1:11 PM
That's about the most dough I'll ever see. : ) Nice one. Much luck in the contest.
Wolf Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Such a clever double entendre! Best of luck in the contest! ~ Gershon
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October 10, 2018 at 12:47 PM
I have a feeling that the rising dough will be disrupting the status quo, WW :) Of course, I acknowledge the fact that the existing state of affairs between yeast and dough has contributed to many a lovely and tasteful loaf! Regards // paul
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October 16, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Back with congratulations on a deserved podium finish! Regards // paul
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