Deirdre Omaidin Poet Haiku

Haiku/Limerick Number Twenty

Haiku master, with me had a word
Said my Haiku's are simply absurd
Just one more for today, then put them away
You'r the mistress, I'm the Master, preferred



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Mountain air biting
Spring lambs trailing on the edge
Mint sauce with dinner

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Carolyn Devonshire March 10, 2009 at 9:45 AM I love the way your poem speaks of "lambs trailing on the edge" and then they become dinner. The haiku master controls your pen! Love, Carolyn

Brian Strand February 12, 2009 at 12:33 AM Excellent haiku Deirdre has a Shiki quality about it.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

February 5, 2009 at 12:41 PM Interesting prelude to this poem. I like the unique imagery in your haiku. Nice use of this concise form. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Raul Moreno February 4, 2009 at 3:19 AM Nice work. Both are filled with insight. I don't think your haiku's are absurd. I love the imagery in your work...Raul

Barbara Gorelick February 3, 2009 at 7:00 PM Good job..this is very different and I like it..lamb..I love it ..sorry my fluffy friends. BG

Sean Kelly February 3, 2009 at 1:07 PM Very unusual combo , Deirdre and most original .... Now what's for dessert ???

Michael Degenhardt February 3, 2009 at 12:52 PM ha ha very clever. The last or slowest lamb will surely be caught and made into dinner. mmmm I love lamb, am I invited? Excellent form and perfect clarity. Michael