Haiku'D R'Evolution

stars replaced the leaves...

cherries remained in orbit
bent stems-- white with frost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chircop Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 10:30 AM
You're so good at haiku...Love to see you kuiiing : )
Allison Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 3:42 PM
lovely imagery Red:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Love it
Spagnola Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 2:22 AM
You have penned beautiful imagery, you Rush fan you!...:)
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November 27, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Is there anyone else to be a fan of Jill? Thanks so much too! :) Yoo!
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