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Haiku You

Love makes flowers bloom, neglect leaves them weak to die. Bees fly away mad!

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Skat A

Date: 6/2/2016 12:31:00 AM

vicki, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 3:11:00 PM

this is really cute!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2012 2:24:00 PM

Everything needs love. - Well done haiku Vicki. - Wishing you a lovely weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/13/2012 1:17:00 PM

Nicely done Vicki! Without tender care flowers have the tendecy to wilt. I love the way you've tied the consequence of neglect to the bees - it reminds us that actions have consequences. Nice!