Haiku You

Love makes flowers bloom,
neglect leaves them weak to die.
Bees fly away mad!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 2, 2016 at 12:31 AM
vicki, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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October 13, 2012 at 3:11 PM
this is really cute!
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October 13, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Everything needs love. - Well done haiku Vicki. - Wishing you a lovely weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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October 13, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Nicely done Vicki! Without tender care flowers have the tendecy to wilt. I love the way you've tied the consequence of neglect to the bees - it reminds us that actions have consequences. Nice!
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