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- Haiku X 62 - Deep Wounded -

deep wounds that leave scars
    one moment much more must flow -
    shadows from the soul

    her tears in silence
    the strong arms that held her up -
    in the thoughts and deeds

    please do not grieve more
    and afterwards remember -
    pearls of morning’s dew





    05.08.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Sara Kendrick

October 4, 2022 at 2:51 PM

I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 4, 2022 at 4:40 PM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment...really appreciate your words, Sara :)

Caren Krutsinger

September 27, 2019 at 2:48 AM

Beautifully written my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 27, 2019 at 2:50 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valerie Staton

January 25, 2019 at 8:32 AM

Very nicely written!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 25, 2019 at 3:17 PM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comment, Valerie :) - hugs // Sun :)

Frances Schiavina

December 26, 2018 at 9:07 AM

Well done! It really touches the heart.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 26, 2018 at 11:54 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Frances - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

February 26, 2017 at 9:48 PM

Your haiku's are awesome as usual :) xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 27, 2017 at 2:30 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Debbie :) - hugs // Sun :)

Carole Duet

October 6, 2016 at 8:27 PM

A touching little poem, Sunny....

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 7, 2016 at 2:43 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Carole :) - hugs // Sun :)

Daniel Davies

April 23, 2016 at 10:07 PM

A pirated pearl of poetry! The greatest form of flattery? Perhaps the pirates act Speaks more profoundly than Any compliments I propose!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 24, 2016 at 6:53 AM

- ..... "My famous Haiku X 62" !!!!!! ...... :)))) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Sun :)

Olli Doyle

April 20, 2016 at 5:27 PM

She has gone and stolen another of your haikus. Haiku 63. What an idiot. http://mochizuki-chiyome.deviantart.com/art/Haiku-X-2-604036190?q=gallery%3AMochizuki-Chiyome&qo=2

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 21, 2016 at 8:21 AM

- Thank you, Olli :)

Gary Bateman

April 20, 2016 at 3:26 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, By the way, this is a quite passionate and very moving Haiku. The imagery is worth a thousand words. Outstanding Work!! A "TR/FAV" too!! (I always expect no less from you Dear One!!) Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 20, 2016 at 3:52 PM

- Thank you, my good friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

April 20, 2016 at 3:21 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, I already have sent Poetry Soup Administration a detailed official complaint by me, on behalf of and in defense of and in support of you. The alleged perpetrator should be aware that stealing another poet's poetry is the gravest violation of expected professional decorum and ethics expected of all of us who write, post poetry and prose, and professionally publish books. Copyright Infringement is a BIG DEAL for sure!! Let me know if you need anything else!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 20, 2016 at 3:50 PM

- Thank you for your lovey support, my friend Gary - All I need is justice and good friends :) - hugs and love // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski

April 19, 2016 at 2:30 PM

Sorry about your poem being stolen Anne--Lis. It seems Tsui has another account. Jan informed me of this after I'd commented on your poem. I hope it all gets sorted out, in simple terms the thief should be banned. You have a beautiful way with words Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 19, 2016 at 3:06 PM

- Lenny, thanks for your support - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jess C.

April 19, 2016 at 1:37 PM

To get it taken down, you'll need to log in to DA, click the report icon at the bottom right of the page, and click on file a DMCA report under permissions issues.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 19, 2016 at 3:05 PM

Jess C.

April 19, 2016 at 1:35 PM

Just as the person commented below, Tsui has stolen your poem here and posted it on her DA, claiming that she owns copyright over it. http://mochizuki-chiyome.deviantart.com/art/Haiku-X-1-603903905 Screenshots: http://imgur.com/OutOfXA http://i.imgur.com/cok84Pm.png http://i.imgur.com/hl9k1ZJ.png

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 19, 2016 at 3:05 PM

- Jess,thanks for your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olli Doyle

April 19, 2016 at 1:30 PM

She is at it again. Tsui has a new name is back to stealing. http://mochizuki-chiyome.deviantart.com/art/Haiku-X-1-603903905 Sorry you have to deal with this idiot.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 19, 2016 at 1:34 PM

- Yes, I've seen it Olli - Thanks again for compassion and supportive words, greatly appreciate that - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

April 10, 2016 at 5:55 PM

As I see some one is advertising your poems for you! I thought I would come and read the original, and tell you, I am happy to read this gem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 11, 2016 at 11:00 AM

- I am happy that this is MY POEMS !!! - hugs and thanks // Arthur :)

Andrew Crisci

April 10, 2016 at 10:39 AM

Hi, Anne Lise. I have sent a message to this impostor. I hope that Poetry Soup will delete her account. She is more despicable than her wicked act. Please notify me of any notifications from Poetry Soup. I stand by you in fighting this injustice. Take care. Hugs, Andrew.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 10, 2016 at 12:45 PM

- I will :) - thanks for your support, Andrew - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

April 10, 2016 at 7:53 AM

Annalise...that's weird that she stole your haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 10, 2016 at 7:56 AM

- Yes, quite rude !!! - I have report it - and posted it in a blog ..... maybe someone will find several poems that are stolen by her? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olli Doyle

April 9, 2016 at 10:02 PM

Wanted to let you know that someone is trying to pass your work off as her own. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/__haiku_x_62___deep_wounded_776352 Tsui Xingjuan

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 11, 2016 at 10:58 AM

- Thanks, Olli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olli Doyle

April 10, 2016 at 9:34 PM

She is know on several games I play and up until she was banned on DeviantArt know as a thief who then tries to pass or sell others work as her own and being underage and acting completely inappropriate with adult rated themes and comments. She has your poem posted on game claiming it as hers.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 10, 2016 at 7:27 AM

- Very grateful for this message, thanks Olli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

August 15, 2015 at 9:08 PM

There are better days ahead, we just have to get through the bad ones to find them... I like how you leave the reader with an inspiring final message. Very nicely written, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 18, 2015 at 12:44 PM

- So true, dear Kelly - Many thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

August 8, 2015 at 4:01 PM

beautiful haiku anne lise deep touching pal my prayers are always with you dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2015 at 4:06 PM

- I'm lucky to have a friend like you, dear Liam - I thank you with all my heart <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake

August 8, 2015 at 1:28 PM

Lovely wriiten piece Anne, Enjoyed the last line, brings on a sad finish. But bright future. Best Wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2015 at 3:01 PM

- The finest floral wreath is made of smile, Kevin :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

August 7, 2015 at 4:51 PM

This sad but written so effortlessly...I love it a fav

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2015 at 11:36 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - Greatly appreciate your "fav.", Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

August 7, 2015 at 4:17 PM

The sour and sweet ingredients of life. You start with deep wounds, but eventually pearls of morning’s dew arrive. Very well expressed haiku, Anne Lise. ~ Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2015 at 11:34 AM

- Always the optimist ..... look positively at life :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

August 7, 2015 at 7:43 AM

A very interesting progression of three. Such is life! And may I wish you a wonderful day! Thank-you again for these images and connections. And yes, life is both happy and sad at the same time. There are no answers to our underlying questions. So we do the best we can.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 7, 2015 at 7:49 AM

- Always try to look for the "light at the end of the tunnel" .... although it can be difficult sometimes - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)