- Haiku X 48 - When Spring Awakens -

- Haiku X 48 - When Spring Awakens -

Frosted mountains thaws
Waterfalls strongly thunder
Waves of spring new life 

A new beginning
Running through the meadowsweets
Can we wish for more



06.03.2015
A-L  Andresen :)
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Petersen Potter Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Beautiful pen Anne Lise! You've captured a very wonderful picture, my very dear friend.I enjoyed the imagery in your haiku.I really hope that your dad is doing better..So sorry to hear about your situation. I'll keep him and you in my prayers, Anne.That's what true friends are for, to care and be there for each other.A 7+! from me! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D."
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 3:21 AM
- Thank you for sharing words from your heart dear Dorian, always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 3:24 PM
I wish you every good thing, Sunshine. You deserve the best. Love you.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:41 PM
- Eileen, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Loved this, I am so anxious for spring, I ran outside and read this to the cold and snow and wind, so they will go away faster!!!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 3:25 AM
- A good idea, Arthur :)) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 1:59 PM
awakening beautiful painting anne lise spring always shines wishing you a blessed day pal
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 2:32 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cooper Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:26 AM
My friend a wonderful haiku, I can see that you you are longing for spring. It is something I have always wished to see a European spring. In Australia the season change is not as dramatic as over there. It must be so spectacularly beautiful. Love Shane xxx
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:40 AM
- We have had an almost "snow-free" winter, many storms and heavy rain this winter - But spring is always beautiful, once it decides to come ..... but, still waiting... - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Shane - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:16 AM
Excellent. Amazing descriptive of spring. Enjoyed reading. Thanks Anne.
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:52 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 4:20 PM
may spring bring you hope, anne... keep the faith.. a beauty.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 5:51 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 6:54 AM
Amazing images of spring bursting out. I am ready.
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 7:52 AM
- ..... I'm ready me too :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Monterey - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 4:44 AM
Your verses invigorating, hope Spring has arrived! Well done dear, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 7:50 AM
- Not much reminiscent of spring yet .... - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Oh I am so wishing spring will awaken soon. It has seemed like a long winter this year so wake up sleepy head. love the haiku. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:17 PM
- Yes, long winter but mild this year on the west coast of Norway - But now we are ready for the spring - I wish you a beautiful weekend dear Phyllis! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Very descriptive of spring..It is almost here..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 1:16 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 10:20 AM
When spring awakens we see beautiful changes in the nature which gives us new picture with seasonal fruits,flowers..... including a new atmospheric phenomena. Again, 7 i feel here. Beautiful imagination bounded in haiku, my lovely friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:19 PM
- Yes, always new stunning pictures - Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments, dear Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 9:33 AM
I see you were inspired...well done my poetic friend
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 1:15 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nunez Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 6:41 AM
Waves of spring new life...a new beginning. Beautiful, Anne-Lise...:D Kim
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 1:15 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 6:19 AM
You can't wish for more no. This poem flies on the light wings of wishes and hope. Well crafted.
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 1:14 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hanlon Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 5:41 AM
very good ann lise, penetrating and evocative
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 6:12 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Steven - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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