Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 38 - Bubble Music -

Bubbles brings joy 

          drumming of autumn rain drops 

          Symphony's dream born 







           25.10.2014
           A-L Andresen :)
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Monterey Sirak November 9, 2014 at 6:40 AM Stunning! I love the music of the rain. Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2014 at 6:44 AM - But this rain does not stop ...... it's been raining for weeks now ...- Monterey, thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos November 6, 2014 at 6:52 AM Just exquisitely beautiful with awesome imagery, Anne-Lise! Excellent haiku! Pandita Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2014 at 7:50 AM - Pandita, thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick November 1, 2014 at 2:30 PM Yes, those raindrop bubbles do make a great musical sound...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2014 at 2:53 PM - Sara, thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne October 28, 2014 at 9:15 PM wonderful image, a great haiku again. Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2014 at 3:59 AM - Maurice, thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance October 28, 2014 at 4:47 PM Beautiful! i like it ;) Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2014 at 3:58 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit, Casarah - // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser October 28, 2014 at 3:11 PM When you put it that way...it is little bubbles! Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2014 at 3:58 PM - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated, M. L. :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks October 27, 2014 at 12:28 PM I can hear the pop! pop! of raindrops falling on roadside puddles. Bubbles is an apt description of that sound. Well penned! Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2014 at 12:32 PM - It "pop! pop!" today as well :))) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit, Timothy :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 27, 2014 at 6:12 AM fabulous imagery Anne Lise. :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2014 at 9:29 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit, Olive :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam October 27, 2014 at 4:01 AM Excellent. Beautiful imagery and painted well. Enjoyed. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2014 at 4:40 AM - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit, Ravi - // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid October 26, 2014 at 1:01 PM oh we have been having a bad storm over here hundred mile an hour winds at times we are both getting the great weather smiling Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2014 at 4:38 AM - Huge natural forces to challenge! - Hold on ... do not blow away !!! - A really great haiku Liam !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid October 26, 2014 at 12:28 PM just simply stunning picture anne lise Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 12:35 PM - It's been raining for weeks now.... - Thanks for the visit and comments, Liam - much appreciated your visit - // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn October 26, 2014 at 11:01 AM Anne Lise, bubbles, rain and Autumn three distintive words on there own but you blend them so sweetly together in this work of beauty, pretty cool concept and unqiue poem, great job cheri Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 12:33 PM - So nice that you enjoy my haiku dear griend Cherl :) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - lovely Sunday:) - // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry T Curtis October 26, 2014 at 8:43 AM Nice Anne, Many try this style of poetry but it seems you have a real talent for it. 'Love it"----looking forward to more Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 8:46 AM - I love Haiku poem .... but is not easy to write - To say much in few words :) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit Jerry :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus October 26, 2014 at 4:42 AM Happy Sunday Anne Lise! I love the sound of falling rain....it's music to my ears, so I can well relate to this beautiful poem. On the other hand, incessant rain can become boring! /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 4:56 AM - Yes, it's true ..... boring - but so is the autumn typically in Norway - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated Paul :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 26, 2014 at 4:42 AM How lovely Anne Lise! Simple yet amazingly beautiful my friend! Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 4:54 AM - So nice that you enjoy my haiku Dr. Upma :) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - lovely weekend my friend :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Earth Ancestor October 26, 2014 at 4:18 AM Autumn A Beautiful Time For Reflection Thanks Anne For Sharing! Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 4:54 AM - A pleasure to share with you Earth - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated - // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer October 25, 2014 at 7:26 PM this is lovely, anne lise! Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2014 at 4:02 AM - So nice that you enjoy my haiku Ilene :) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - lovely weekend my friend :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith October 25, 2014 at 4:42 PM Simply beautiful A-L...hugs Tim Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 5:05 PM - So nice that you enjoy my haiku Tim :) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - lovely weekend my friend :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami October 25, 2014 at 4:06 PM Innocent beauty of nature...I love it...Thank you very much... Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 4:09 PM - A pleasure to share with you my friend Sandip - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated - // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2014 at 3:22 PM This is a delightful one, Anne Lise!! Is it raining there? Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 3:25 PM - It's been raining for weeks, Andrea - - I will soon have webbed between the toes :))) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit - // Anne-Lise :)

A K Das Mridul October 25, 2014 at 2:16 PM Nice title. Nice line is 'drumming of autumn rain drops'. Nice Haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 2:25 PM - So nice that you enjoy my haiku - - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit, A.K - // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 25, 2014 at 1:34 PM What a heavenly music we will hear! Excellent dear friend, Anne Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 2:01 PM - A special thank you my friend Demetrios ! - Have a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath October 25, 2014 at 12:47 PM Coming soon and knocking at the door. Beautiful imagery painted into a beautiful picture. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 2:04 PM - As long as I have it warm and comfortable indoors ..... let it rain ... let it rain... - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit, Bl - // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade October 25, 2014 at 12:28 PM As a child, I used to lay in bed and listen to the rain hitting the tin roof . . . a song of the night . . . and then silence. Its fun to see where words and images will take you. thank-you for sharing . . . all the best. Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 12:32 PM - Yes, it was just what I thought of "a song of the night" ..... become sleepy by the sound :) - Thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit, David - // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 25, 2014 at 12:15 PM A real bubblesong resonates well in the ear drumming of autumn rain drops Pleasure to read and reread. LOVE Anne Lise want haikuXX....rajat Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 12:29 PM - It's been raining for weeks ..... it drums on the roof ..... - thanks for the visit and comments - much appreciated your visit,Rajat - // Anne-Lise :)

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