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Anne-Lise Andresen

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05.11.2025

1424 HAIKU Poetry Contest

- Haiku X 382 - careful -


     
        children of the earth
        a frail shell around an egg -
        broken glass and bricks

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2025

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Jennifer Proxenos

November 8, 2025 at 8:38 AM

THIS COMMENT IS SO HEARTFELT AS BABY JESUS LOOKS SO PEACEFUL AND LOVED IN THOSE GENTLE HANDS. WE HAVE BEEN BLESSED WITH A 2ND GRANDCHILD, A BEAUTIFUL LITTLE BABY BOY, 2 WEEKS OLD. I LOVE THIS HAIKU ANNE LISE AND SEND YOU ALL MY BLESSINGS AND LOVE, JENNIFER.

November 6, 2025 at 12:27 PM

This is deep and strikingly unique. Wishing you the best in the contest

November 6, 2025 at 3:12 AM

Creative work that you have penned. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Ahhh!! The picture so precious. Sara K

Regina Mcintosh

November 6, 2025 at 2:19 AM

Yours is beautifully done. God bless you. love, Gina

November 6, 2025 at 1:57 AM

Anne-Lise, This is profound and highly original. Good luck to you. Thank you so much for reading This Autumn Crypt and your compliment Howard

sara Etgen-Baker

November 5, 2025 at 5:40 PM

wow! amazing! best wishes with this contest entry PS image was perfect!

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