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- Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line -

Dew wet spider web 

        Sparkling pearls on fine parade 

        Life's boasting beauty 






  23.10.2014
  Anne-Lise Andresen :)
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Tim Peterson

December 9, 2014 at 8:56 PM

I love spider webs and your imagery paints a beautiful picture

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 10, 2014 at 3:09 AM

- Tim, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

November 9, 2014 at 6:38 AM

Your haiku captures perfectly the ethereal beauty of a spider's silken web. Fantastic collaboration

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 9, 2014 at 6:42 AM

- Monterey, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton

October 29, 2014 at 4:07 AM

Very nice collaboration here. frank herrera is the only one i collaborate with from here. love haiku form.format

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 29, 2014 at 4:12 AM

- Cindy, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

October 28, 2014 at 9:20 PM

Great colaboration excellent haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 29, 2014 at 3:57 AM

- Maurice, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Van Yan

October 26, 2014 at 6:39 PM

good haiku! much better than mine!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 27, 2014 at 4:10 AM

- Then I have to read yours Van :)) - thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres

October 25, 2014 at 8:20 AM

Though I'm not in the least a fan of spiders I am a fan of their beautiful webs... such intricate designs and you have captured a dew kissed one divinely !!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 25, 2014 at 9:04 AM

- I'm not too fond of spiders me rather - Debra, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

October 24, 2014 at 7:47 PM

This is winner my friend so light and lovely, good luck in the contest I'll be crossing my fingers for you guys, cheri glad you like my route 666 and Anne Lise, booo! LOL RIGHT BACK AT YOU GIRL LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 25, 2014 at 6:08 AM

- Cherl, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - This is not written for contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

October 24, 2014 at 3:59 PM

Very creative work for you two..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Reads like a winner to me ..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 25, 2014 at 6:07 AM

- Sara, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - This is not written for contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

October 24, 2014 at 2:50 PM

lovely imagery,anne and D... I am enjoying this.. huggs on a great Friday!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 24, 2014 at 3:01 PM

- Nette, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

October 24, 2014 at 2:15 PM

Very pretty and vivid picture of a spider web. Kudos to you both . Xx~Xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 24, 2014 at 3:01 PM

- Kim, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser

October 23, 2014 at 4:43 PM

It's a joy seeing the dew on Spiders Webs. For one it highlights the intricate spinning of such an engineering feat. Loved this piece Anne Lise, James :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 24, 2014 at 2:05 AM

- James, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

October 23, 2014 at 2:17 PM

I didn't even realize this was a collab.... congrats to Demetrios as well! I wonder how one can do a collab on such a small poem... interesting.

Timothy Hicks

October 23, 2014 at 2:37 PM

Ahhh cool. Collabs can sometimes be fun... it's interesting to see how two minds work together.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2014 at 2:31 PM

- :))) We have 2 lines each (with the title) ..... then it became to an beautiful Haiku! :))))

Liam Mcdaid

October 23, 2014 at 2:02 PM

powerful piece you both painted very beautifully penned

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2014 at 2:16 PM

- Liam, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

October 23, 2014 at 1:05 PM

Quite exquisite, Anne! There is a celebration for life - even for the less popular of creatures. Beautiful haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2014 at 1:28 PM

- The great things inspires awe in us, but the little things affect us - Timothy, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dan Helppi

October 23, 2014 at 12:58 PM

I love it! I read it as imagining soup on the world wide web. Great!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2014 at 1:32 PM

- Dan, thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

October 23, 2014 at 8:14 AM

Beautiful write Anne Lise, never thought of it that way. The spider's web is so truly beautiful , especially with the dew while the sun shines its pearls :) eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2014 at 8:35 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Eve :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

October 23, 2014 at 7:49 AM

Wow! The imagery in this magnificent write is truly amazing my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning Anne-Lise! I'm so impressed with your talent you have displayed with this awesome piece! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2014 at 8:36 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments on : - Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line - my friend,Russell :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)