Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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03.08.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 371 - eat me -

                                          passionate desire
                                      satisfying your cravings -
                                       sweet wild raspberries

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Terry Flood August 4, 2025 at 4:24 PM We have them in abundance…. Well, we would if the blackbirds didn’t snaffle them all. And if the blackbirds should leave even one… my wife nabs that! So… as far as I recall… I love raspberries. Tasty write, Anne-Lise

Kim Rodrigues August 4, 2025 at 1:18 PM mmm…yummy poem…lol - title!

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2025 at 11:08 AM Yummm, One of my favorite berries.

Victor Buhagiar August 4, 2025 at 2:34 AM I love all berries. Pity we don't get them in Malta. Lovely picture too. Hugs.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh August 3, 2025 at 7:58 PM Lovely Enjoyed reading the poem

Joseph P. DiMino August 3, 2025 at 7:54 PM Delicious write!!

sara Etgen-Baker August 3, 2025 at 5:22 PM outstanding Haiku, Anne-Lise! Must fave!

Sotto Poet August 3, 2025 at 2:00 PM Excellent Haiku! Among the finest I've read in a long time. There isn't a single incorrect assumption in it. Well done! Anne Lise

Paula Goldsmith August 3, 2025 at 12:43 PM I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku write. Great Picture, looks like I could pick them. I have not had any in a long time but I do love to eat them. Hugs... Have a wonderful day eating and writing away........... Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2025 at 12:52 PM - I saw them while I was walking today... they are ripe now... ready to eat :) - Many thanks for the kind comment, Paula :) - hugs

John Fleming August 3, 2025 at 10:30 AM Superb Haiku! One of the best I have read for quite a while. Everything is just perfectly right about it. Nicely done, Anne-Lise! :) john Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2025 at 12:10 PM - Thank you very much, John ... really appreciate your comment :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy August 3, 2025 at 7:07 AM Very nice! Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2025 at 7:26 AM - Thank you very much, A.A. :) - hugs

Deb M August 3, 2025 at 7:06 AM Those raspberries look soooo delicious Sunshine accompanied by a lovely sweet and fresh poem! Just lovely….Debx Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2025 at 7:26 AM - Thank you very much for your kind comment, Deb :) - hugs