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09.07.2025

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- Haiku X 369 - fawn -


                                         in her solitude
                                  independence at own risk ~
                                      with quiet resolution

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Sotto Poet

July 26, 2025 at 5:41 AM

A strong and concise haiku—so great fragility and power condensed into a few lines. Anne-Lise. Warm hugs

CayCay Godwin

July 22, 2025 at 6:55 AM

I'm in awe of the deer's coloring, do you think it's natural or enhanced? I could happily stare at that picture for an hour. The haiku is great, very clever and I enjoyed it. I'm off to see if you've posted any humor. I've been gone awhile and really missed my Anne-Lise' humor fixes. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Victor Buhagiar

July 22, 2025 at 1:36 AM

Lovely picture. Reminds me of when my mother took me to watch my first film. Splendid haiku. Hugs.

Duke Beaufort

July 21, 2025 at 1:51 PM

Anne-Lise, as you note, a lot is at play when we go out into the world. A lot of risk to think about, but we do it. Hopefully with the risk mitigated.

Deb M

July 21, 2025 at 4:56 AM

Awww thats simply lovely Sunshine! Debx

Rowena Velasco

July 19, 2025 at 7:57 PM

A powerful and succinct senryu—so much strength and vulnerability wrapped in these few lines. The phrase “independence at own risk” speaks volumes, and the “quiet resolution” lingers with a dignified echo. Beautifully done.

Eve Roper

July 18, 2025 at 6:25 PM

Great imagery and feelings. Soup mail

Mike Gentile

July 15, 2025 at 7:41 AM

Anne-Lise, your haiku is so beautiful in its depiction of the wonder of nature! Happy Tuesday xxoo

sara Etgen-Baker

July 14, 2025 at 4:58 PM

lovely and captivating words...like the 'quiet resolution' at the end!

Regina Mcintosh

July 13, 2025 at 5:24 AM

lovely. God bless you, love, Gina

Heidi Sands

July 12, 2025 at 11:33 AM

Perfect Haiku. Very nice! . Hugs :)

Jack Horne

July 12, 2025 at 11:20 AM

lovely haiku, my friend

Andrea Dietrich

July 11, 2025 at 11:19 AM

Quiet resolution. Such a nice phrase

Kim Rodrigues

July 11, 2025 at 6:52 AM

Truly, two is better than one. Very nice ku!

Anne Winter

July 11, 2025 at 5:14 AM

A beautiful picture and a beautiful haiku calming my heart with tranquility. I'm so glad I read it. I miss your friday poems. Love, Anne

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 10, 2025 at 5:29 PM

Nature's serenity and peace is evoked by this poem about a fawn's first independent steps. Loved it, and the picture, too! :) hugs

Joseph P. DiMino

July 10, 2025 at 4:37 PM

A books worth of wisdom, in so few lines. Great writing!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

July 10, 2025 at 2:39 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, your poem feels like a gentle nod to all those who choose authenticity, even when it’s lonely or uncertain. A wonderful tribute to inner strength, to the peace that can be found in our own company, and to the silent determination that carries us through. Amen! Summer Blessings, Dear Anne-Lise, Daniel

Jay Narain

July 10, 2025 at 11:10 AM

Beautiful fawn and surrounding. Nice summer haiku.

Sara Kendrick

July 9, 2025 at 2:48 PM

Ahhh!!! Beautiful fawn. Yes, they rest in a quiet place while mom feeds in the surrounding area. Soon they will be on their own. Thanks for sharing. Love the photo that goes along. Sara K