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05.06.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 362 - clouds in grey -


                                        piercing cloud layers
                                  shamelessly without remorse ~
                                     june stubborn downpour
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 10:19 AM
you beautifully captured a rainy June in your Haiku. We had a rainy June as well. I could almost smell the rain, hugs yellow rose
Buhagiar Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 3:09 AM
You write haikus so well. I have three on my list and still wondering if I should delete them. They are no good. Hugs.
Godwin Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Anne-Lise. LOVE white blooms, to me they are pure and untainted, almost spiritual. How can I 'have', 'find' that pic? Looking at it was like going to church. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Good one. I actually wish for them. My grass is turning yellow
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 6:35 PM
They’ve no good conscience!
Winter Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 8:37 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, yes so many scary and stormy downpours. I like light summer rain without the lightning. Nice haiku ! Best, Anne
Rodgers Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 6:02 AM
Dear Anne-lise, Oh June’s wild spirit so perfect and yes I can almost feel that stubborn downpour pushing through the clouds, unbothered by anything in its path. There’s a boldness and honesty in your words that I really admire. Poetry never fails to move me, rain or shine. Spring Blessings, My Dear Anne-Lise, Danie
George Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 5:24 AM
We too are having stubborn downpour to the point of submerging land and even houses. Great haiku, dear Anne. Hugs!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 12:07 AM
Nice Haiku, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 12:58 AM
- Thanks, Subimal :) - hugs
Raven Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent Haiku, painting for me a wonderful picture. I do love the rain, but not when it is being driven by the wind. It is strange but your words bring me peace. I love both the picture and the Haiku. They complement each other so well. Your friend always ..... Mike. XXX
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2025 at 1:01 AM
- Too much rain in Norway... we should have had flippers like ducks ... - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Mike :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 11:51 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku write. Great/Pretty Picture... We need rain. Send some this way. Hahaha!!!! Have a blessed day writing away.............
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 12:15 PM
- With pleasure, Paula ... you want the cold wind too ? - Thanks :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 11:23 AM
Beautiful picture and haiku. It is summer time.
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 11:37 AM
- It doesn't feel like it, Jay ... 11 degrees, windy and rainy :( - Thanks :) - hugs
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