Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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24.04.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 354 - waterway -

                                           river lush and rich
                                    driftwood delays its journey -
                                       the mountain snow melts

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Sara Kendrick April 29, 2025 at 3:27 AM Beautiful painting in real-time and a very nice description in a haiku. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Phyllis Babcock April 28, 2025 at 10:18 AM Great picture and wonderful write my friend. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith April 27, 2025 at 1:26 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a wonderful spring day.........

Duke Beaufort April 27, 2025 at 7:56 AM Anne-Lise, a beautiful scene indeed. The I can practically hear the sound of the water rushing down the slope. I bet it's cold!!

Hilda Greenhough April 26, 2025 at 4:45 PM I love this haiku. It's amazing how you wove driftwood into a position of power in this haiku.

Sotto Poet April 26, 2025 at 3:03 PM Hey Anne-Lise! What a vivid and very descriptive poem! I really like the image you shared.

Michael Tor April 25, 2025 at 7:34 PM Such a scenic haiku loved your words...

Jay Narain April 25, 2025 at 10:32 AM Nice picture and a perfect haiku for it.

Reya Suri April 25, 2025 at 10:30 AM What a rich piece with perfect imagery! Love the picture you've provided.

Victor Buhagiar April 25, 2025 at 12:54 AM Perfect imagery. I've seen this picture before but my muse is at low ebb. Wonderful haiku, dear Anne.

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 24, 2025 at 7:04 PM I enjoyed your beautiful poem, and also the beautiful picture, Anne-Lise. Have a great weekend. :)

Yann Rolland April 24, 2025 at 6:24 PM beautiful and sensitive, remind me something in "Yellowstone", a day off enjoyed yann

David Crandall April 24, 2025 at 9:19 AM Ah, put me on the bank of that mountain stream! I remember sending little stick boats down streams like that and imagining their journeys. :-) Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2025 at 10:07 AM - Happy childhood memories, David ... I did the same :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham April 24, 2025 at 8:11 AM Lovely Anne-Lise, brought back memories of the melting snow in the fjords. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2025 at 10:09 AM - Nice that you still dream about the Norwegian fjords... they have left their mark, Tom :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs