Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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12.09.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 335 - last flower -

                                         when sunset fadeth
                                    the autumn's adolescence - 
                                       with jagged fragments

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Warren Doll November 10, 2024 at 12:07 PM Anne-Lise, you are a true haiku master. This haiku is just wonderful, Hugs~ Warren

Duke Beaufort September 30, 2024 at 10:46 AM Anne-Lise...you describe so easily what we see all around us at this time of year. Your work is such a pleasure to read. I live how this poem starts in such a moving fashion. It's something very creative and unusual. Smiles!!

Hilda Greenhough September 20, 2024 at 4:03 PM This is a wonderful way to describe autumn. It's a lovely haiku.

Paula Goldsmith September 17, 2024 at 12:17 PM I enjoyed reading your autumn Haiku write. Sad flower picture... Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.................

Len Gasun September 17, 2024 at 8:17 AM Exquisite haiku with tints of sadness my dear poet friend. Love reading this gem tonight. Thanks for sharing. God bless. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues September 13, 2024 at 2:49 PM My mom’s flowers from her funeral were sunflowers. I brought them home and watched them fade. Great haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2024 at 12:10 PM - Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Karen Croft September 13, 2024 at 8:37 AM A sad but beautiful picture Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2024 at 12:10 PM - Thank you very much, Karen :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar September 13, 2024 at 2:05 AM If this is a dying sunflower, we need it for oil. Lovely haiku and picture. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2024 at 12:09 PM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2024 at 2:03 PM Very elegant with a touch of sadness in this well written haiku. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2024 at 12:09 PM - Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs