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01.04.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 321 - white anemone -

                                            watching early birth
                                          anemone earthly stars -
                                           sepals smiling crack
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Beaufort Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:12 PM
Anne-Lise, Anything that cracks a smile makes me smile internally. This is really something that makes me happy internally. You created this with such economy of words--that is a remarkable feat and much appreciated.
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Lovely flower. I don't think I have ever seen those in our area. Thanks for sharing the snapshot and the lovely Haiku. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 2:28 AM
Beautiful cultivated flowers. Your haikus are the best. Hugs.
May Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Lovely write Anne, hugs
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April 2, 2024 at 4:57 PM
This is beautiful what a gift you have in finding these beautiful pictures and writing these elegant poems to enhance this in such a powerful way, : ). Hugs
Narain Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Beautiful haiku on earthly stars.
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:08 AM
- Thank you, Jay :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 7:51 AM
Beautiful earthly stars. A delightful poem, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:08 AM
- Thank you, Vijay :) - hugs
George Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Though anemones are wildflowers, they are quite beautiful to look at, especially the white ones. Great haiku dear Anne. Love and hugs!
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:07 AM
- Thank you, Valsa :) - Yes, they grow wild :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 9:48 PM
It's such a joy to see flowers blooming again, hope you had a lovely Easter Anne-Lise. Tom
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April 2, 2024 at 11:06 AM
- Thank you, Tom :) - hugs
Vaso Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:33 PM
a beautiful Haiku with beautiful flowers!
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:06 AM
- Thank you, Arthur :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 3:54 PM
a blooming lovely poems Anne-Lise! hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:06 AM
- Thank you, Jan :) - hugs
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April 1, 2024 at 3:06 PM
HHello Sunshine Smile, A beautiful poem about a flower. hugs. /Darlene/
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April 2, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I hope you had a Happy Easter. You are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/.
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:05 AM
- Thank you, Darlene :) - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 3:00 PM
Thank you for this Haiku of nature's wonders.
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:05 AM
- Thank you, Hilda :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Your Haiku, Anne-Lise, beautifully captures the enchanting process of a flower blooming, showcasing the intricate beauty of nature. The delicate moment of anemones unfurling their petals is depicted with mesmerizing detail. Your description of these early blooms as "earthly stars" and the emphasis on their sepals cracking open adds a thoughtful touch to the observation of new life emerging.
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:05 AM
- Thank you, Las :) - hugs
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