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10.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 314 - pink flowering -

                                         gems in abundance
                                 the cherry tree's sacred breath -
                                      spring strewing flowers
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Beaufort Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 5:43 AM
Anne-Lise, It's that time of year that you describe so adroitly. I'll be thinking of gems now when I look at the blossoms!
Sambourne Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 7:48 PM
A superb Haiku for spring. I especially enjoyed the alliteration in your final line. Be well. Brian
Fowler Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Beautifully written dear Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:02 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Linda :) - hugs
Babcock Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Lovely haiku and cannot wait for cherry to season to get some fresh cherries. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:02 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Phyllis :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 4:12 AM
I really like this one. Those cherry blossoms are beautiful as are peach trees. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:02 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs
One Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 1:30 PM
Can I call you the queen of haiku? Stunning arrangement of words my friend..
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 1:36 PM
:))) ...better than queen of poo :))) - I love writing haiku, S.O. :) - Many thanks :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Masterfully done, dear Anne Lise.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:02 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, I love Haikus, and yours is exceptional, and it just proliferates with SPRING! Yes, Loved it. - Blessings, Daniel
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:01 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Daniel :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 6:04 AM
Awesome color and beauty to the flowers in your photo. Much enjoyed the spring exuberance you convey, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:01 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 10:14 PM
Beautiful imagery and photo, you do have a blessed pen for imagery.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:01 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Eve :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 3:35 PM
Yes, spring is definitely here now Anne-Lise. You captured it well in your haiku. Tom
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Well-executed, exhibiting exquisite imagery and eloquent diction. The composition of this haiku, particularly the line "gems in abundance the cherry tree's sacred breath," is truly refined and captivating. It exudes a sense of elegance and beauty.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Las :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 1:56 PM
Absolutely gorgeous, i love cherry blossoms, that picture made my heart beam, and i love how youv written also this haiku especially “ gems in abundance the cherry tree's sacred breath -“ elegant and gorgeous! Makes me wonder, hows the weather there right now? Sending you light always dear anne lise, pleasure reading you always
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 4:31 AM
- Spring is in an early start phase here yet... still frost at night... the cherry tree is not in bloom yet - Thanks for the lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs
M  Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 1:32 PM
Beautiful words and beautiful picture Sunshine! Debx
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 1:37 PM
- Many thanks ... spring is beautiful, Deb :) - hugs
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