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30.01.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 301 - windy -

                                        sentenceless clouds drift
                                          obliterate the curtains -
                                              wind rises higher

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Duke Beaufort

February 6, 2024 at 12:00 PM

Ah...the feeling of an approaching front or something more violent to come. The feeling of the clouds being a bit disorganized is also a keen way to look at the atmosphere. The might apply to emotion as well. Our minds might be clouded while we get more excited.

Phyllis Babcock

January 31, 2024 at 10:41 AM

The high winds can certainly blow those curtains creating sounds or doing a lot of damage around the yard. Nice haiku. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 1, 2024 at 2:22 AM

- Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

January 30, 2024 at 6:21 PM

Oh my, what a beautifully descriptive and intriguing write within few words.. A vivid imagery you've painted here, which also has a meaningful essence, metaphorically.. Clouds drifting away and the voice rises beyond, with moving winds that erase stillness.. Wonderfully crafted!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 1, 2024 at 2:21 AM

- Thank you very much, Hiya :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

January 30, 2024 at 4:35 PM

I appreciate the profound imagery present in your Haiku, Anne-Lise. Exceptionally brilliant.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 1, 2024 at 2:21 AM

- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2024 at 1:40 PM

Beautiful snapshot to go along with your work. Great write. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2024 at 1:42 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

January 30, 2024 at 12:36 PM

I feel the imagery in your short poems. Brilliant. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 1, 2024 at 2:21 AM

- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Deb M

January 30, 2024 at 12:26 PM

Well said Sweet Sunshine! Lovely….Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 1, 2024 at 2:20 AM

- Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman

January 30, 2024 at 12:22 PM

Oh, I do love your haiku, Anne-Lise. You really have the ability to say and illustrate so much in seventeen syllables. I especially love your mute clouds drifting as the wind rises! A storm is on the horizon here and I can feel the wind rising! Thank you for sharing your gift. Blessings and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 1, 2024 at 2:20 AM

- Thank you very much, Sam :) - hugs