Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 29 - Autumn Arrives -

- Haiku on enlightenment -
    


     Time begins to slow 
     and, as my little heart knows 
     Autumn takes over


     From Autumn to Spring
     Birds to South took their strong wing 
     To return again 





    13.08.2014
    A collaboration with: Jim Horn and A-L Andresen :)
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    - Thank you for my 4th place in the contest :) -



    Contest Name:Haiku on Enlightenment 
    Sponsor:Marvin Celestial
    Deadline	: 9/11/2014

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Andrea Dietrich September 3, 2014 at 5:21 PM this is a really nice collaboration. Congrats to you both. Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2014 at 3:07 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Trichet September 2, 2014 at 9:09 PM Congratulations Anne-Lise and Jim on a fine collaboration. Loved it Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2014 at 3:47 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Mark - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 2, 2014 at 2:53 PM A wonderful collaboration many congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xxx Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 3:48 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Jan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 2, 2014 at 6:46 AM Congrats Anne Lise on ur wonderful winning haiku! Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 11:51 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit Dr. Upma - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 2, 2014 at 4:52 AM Congratulations to both of you, Jim and Anne Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 11:50 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit Dr.Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh September 1, 2014 at 10:37 PM Congratulations with much love and prayers. I love your haiku. Love, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 1:13 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit Regina - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans September 1, 2014 at 9:06 PM Congratulations on your very well done Haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 1:12 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit Brenda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler August 20, 2014 at 4:02 PM Some people do tend to shy away from the outdoors when the weather turns cool. But, they know that a warm spring will be arriving soon.... A lovely collaboration! Good luck to you both! Anne-Lise Andresen August 21, 2014 at 3:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak August 17, 2014 at 5:07 AM Beautiful! I love Autumn, when all of nature dons its finest party attire. Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2014 at 5:09 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan August 15, 2014 at 7:46 PM Anne Lise that is so beautiful, you must be going into your autumn, while we are going into our spring, take care my dear friend have a good weekend..............Vera............ Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2014 at 4:53 AM - I love spring, Vera !!! - I will come to you ..... when autumn is here :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, dear Vera. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath August 15, 2014 at 9:08 AM Very nice haiku that reminds us the autumn's cool air. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 9:12 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jeremy Martin August 15, 2014 at 3:11 AM This poem makes me long for autumn. It sings of its simple pleasures! I love the autumn air and smell of fallen leaves... Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 3:46 AM - My favorite season is spring,Jeremy - where all life gets a new beginning .... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - Always a pleasure to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh August 15, 2014 at 12:02 AM I love it. Happy writing and God bless you. Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 3:45 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Regina. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll August 14, 2014 at 10:14 PM Lovely haiku Anne! Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 3:45 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn August 14, 2014 at 2:55 PM From Autumn to Spring, Birds to South took their strong wing, To return again. Jim Horn Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 4:14 PM - Can not find this poem about Robin Williams - Post it on your page in P-S :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 4:10 PM - I've read it - a special sentence .... I can not explain it - James Horn August 15, 2014 at 5:58 AM http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=449735 Do me a favor. Read this and see if "Now of tears we both cry streams." A sentence or line is confusing when it lacks a subject. Other that that this is truly her best poem. Jim Horn James Horn August 15, 2014 at 4:12 AM Am in the process of entering another Robin Williams poem into Poetry Soup. You should be able to read it in a few minutes. Being that you are a friend now, you can read my poems at www.poetrysoup.com under name of jthorn5656 and password of soldierboy all one word in small letters. PoetrySoup should sent our poems out to everyone who has previously read one of them. Poetry Soup is great for kids as a starter for an entry into the world of poetry. Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 3:59 AM - Thanks .... I post it as: A collaboration with Jim Horn and AL Andresen :)

Ravi Sathasivam August 14, 2014 at 7:55 AM Excellent. Lovely haiku Anne. Enjoyed. Tfs Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 11:42 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Ravi. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn August 14, 2014 at 7:33 AM Spring soon will have sprung; Find flowers among Us so we can start to see. Also, add this to your poem. We can call this a continuation poem. Jim Horn James Horn August 15, 2014 at 6:08 AM Autumn audacious, with all her colors galore; Spring, what is in store. Jim Horn Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 11:41 AM - But, this is about the autumn Jim :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser August 14, 2014 at 6:11 AM Yes, and it is coming way too fast. I still feel as if I never had a summer. Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 11:42 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, M.L. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner August 14, 2014 at 2:41 AM Oh Anne, sometimes I wish Autumn, Queen of the Seasons would last forever. I like how you give Autumn an aggressive motion. J.A.B. Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 3:34 AM - I love spring and summer ............... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Justin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome August 13, 2014 at 6:32 PM Wonderful. autumn winter spring. your sunshine. Well done Pete. Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 3:31 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Peter. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian August 13, 2014 at 5:23 PM Don't be sad, my dear Sunshine: In the midst of winter, I found there was, within me, an invincible summer (Albert Camus). My Autumn and winter will be sweeter with your sunshine rays. Lovely haiku...You captured it well, my dear. Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 3:30 AM ..... Always a little sad .... when summer sings its last verse :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, dear Eileen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn August 13, 2014 at 4:16 PM Add this to your poem. With a trail of leaves I have learned to love so much And thrill to their touch. Go to my other last poems I have written about Robin Williams. They are all great to me and could care less about someone's opinion except Corbin's and yours. So right on and keep writing on. Jim Horn Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 3:28 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, James/Jim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi August 13, 2014 at 3:05 PM Nice to touch base with you this afternoon we haven't talked in a long time, how are you doing? Light & Love Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 3:12 PM - Yes, long time no see .... I'm fine, hope the same for you Debbie ! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid August 13, 2014 at 2:37 PM really beautifully drawn picture Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 2:50 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin August 13, 2014 at 1:54 PM Yes, autumn does infect the spirit like no other. It's been a while, Anne Lise. Love, daver Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 2:49 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my - Haiku - Autumn Arrives - Always a pleasure to see you, Daver. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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