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20.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 297 - snow gleams -

                                          a fleeting moments
                                     winter's crystal clear ballet - 
                                           in drowsy slumber
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January 21, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Lovely imagery.. love that second line..
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 2:41 AM
- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs
Sharma  Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 8:49 AM
'Winter's crystal clear ballet" Oh how so beautifully described dear Anne-Lise. I loved reading your eloquent words, quite whimsical and fascinating in their vividness.. It painted such a unique imagery in my mind.. Gorgeous haiku, keep writing & shining always. Sending many best wishes & light :)
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 2:41 AM
- Thank you very much, Hiya :) - hugs
Lawless Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 6:36 AM
beautifully captured Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 2:40 AM
- Thank you very much, John :) - hugs
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 4:21 PM
an absolute joy to read Anne-Lise the imagery is sublime and goes with the picture so well:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:03 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Jan :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 2:25 PM
A very peaceful scene in your haiku Anne-Lise. I bet it looks amazing outside. Big storm heading for the uk tomorrow, 80mph winds and heavy rains forecast.. Tom
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:03 AM
- Wooow...stay indoors, Tom - hugs
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 2:18 PM
You really should put together your haiku with the photos you've chosen in a binder as a keepsake. Each one is beautiful.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:06 AM
- Yes, I understood :) - (It was Jan who said that) - Thanks :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:03 AM
I didn’t mean to publish. I meant for yourself. It would be a beautiful collection.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:02 AM
- Thanks for the good suggestions, Lin :) - hugs
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:00 AM
It's a difficult process in Norway, Jan - (and expensive ... I wouldn't earn a single penny) ... and the poems are in English ... - hugs
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 4:21 PM
i think she should publish them Lin, she is an exceptional writer of the form:-) hugs jan xx
Greenhough Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 1:59 PM
This poem, in traditional Haiku, is short but full of thoughts. It caused me to feel a surge of reverence for the majesty of winter.
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 2:11 PM
- Haiku is always short ... but, can say a lot in its three lines ... many thanks for your comment, Hilda - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs
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