Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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13.12.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Winter Haiku - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

2 st place in the contest

- Haiku X 294 - cold mouse -

                                              on blue-frozen snow
                                        small mouse papery rustling ~
                                            path sparkles with stars

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Sara Kendrick December 26, 2023 at 5:23 AM Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2023 at 11:40 AM Back with. Congrats. Hope you are having an Awesome Christmas

Tania Kitchin December 24, 2023 at 12:38 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!

Paula Goldsmith December 24, 2023 at 7:38 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write again. What a cute picture. Love It. Hugs... Merry Christmas...........

Duke Beaufort December 14, 2023 at 5:43 PM I can actually hear the sound in my head as you describe it. That's pretty powerful poetry. Really impressive!

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2023 at 1:35 PM that last line is adorable!

Silent One December 14, 2023 at 7:38 AM Awwwthis is a lovely one! Good luck in the contest

Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2023 at 6:57 PM What a fun Haiku write/cute picture. I enjoyed this one. Good Luck.. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..........

Deb M December 13, 2023 at 3:20 PM Sweet poem sweet picture Sunshine! Lovely…Debx

Jerry Brotherton December 13, 2023 at 3:02 PM Excellently penned haiku, my friend. Beautiful, but chilly, imagery, Anne.

Sara Kendrick December 13, 2023 at 2:44 PM Ahhh!!! The painting makes it look like a lovely pet. Not so though. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham December 13, 2023 at 1:40 PM Brrr, we all seek she from the cold even the poor mouse. Good luck in the contest Anne Lise. Tom

Sotto Poet December 13, 2023 at 12:11 PM Wonderfully crafted Haiku, Anne-Lise, your imagery brings to my mind an exquisite picture of a frozen winter land, perfectly. Best wishes for the contest Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2023 at 12:41 PM - Cold for both humans and animals... I don't like winter, Las -Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Jay Narain December 13, 2023 at 10:31 AM Nice haiku from your frozen winter land, Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2023 at 12:37 PM - Deep frozen for a few weeks now ... cold for little mice ... many thanks, Jay :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino December 13, 2023 at 9:28 AM Lovely imagery! Verse woven like lace, the precious cuff of ever endearing poetry. Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2023 at 9:52 AM - Thank you very much, Joe ... we have frozen blue snow ... and many small wood mice where I live ... but, they have no clothes :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh December 13, 2023 at 9:10 AM Oh, love this so. God bless you sweet lady. much love, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2023 at 9:49 AM - Many thanks, Gina ... it's cold for a sweet little winter mouse :) - hugs