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30.08.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 290 - Leaf Dance -

                                         of dizzy autumn
                                    in dark honey reflection -
                                          were kissed by plum lips

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Kelly Deschler

September 9, 2023 at 6:55 PM

The beauty of the autumn season can be both dazzling and dizzying at the same time ... You capture such wonders and share them with us all in this lovely poem :)

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 1:01 PM

Wow!! How interesting is this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by. Sara

Nancy Kaufman

September 1, 2023 at 7:22 AM

Wow Anne Lise, I love the metaphor as well as the imagery and also the simplicity of you're haiku.

Kim Rodrigues

August 31, 2023 at 6:38 PM

A beautiful image of a fall leaf!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 1, 2023 at 12:29 AM

- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

August 31, 2023 at 2:22 PM

A dizzy autumn that will make us spin like a dervish lol, your enrich my life when I read you Anne :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 1, 2023 at 12:30 AM

- Many thanks ... a pleasure to share with you, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Jay Narain

August 31, 2023 at 10:58 AM

Nice haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 31, 2023 at 11:02 AM

- Thank you, Jay :) - hugs

Joseph May

August 31, 2023 at 7:39 AM

I enjoyed this haiku Anne, Very nicely penned

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 31, 2023 at 8:57 AM

- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs

Sally Eslinger

August 31, 2023 at 6:23 AM

Luscious vision! Must make this a Fav, Anne-Lise, because it has truly, TRULY given me a new & lasting way of not only seeing but Feeling autumn as i will see& feel it soon. Here, your 17 syllables in 3 lines present a sort of life-size diorama…Fantastic fantasy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 31, 2023 at 7:03 AM

- Autumn has arrived ... the colors provide inspiration, Sally :) - Thank you so much for comment and fave :) - hugs