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- Haiku X 28 - Aha Moment -

Haiku "aha" Moment 



 
    The way you touch me
    you haunt me to no avail...
    Sail to heaven's gate





    06.08.2014
    A-L Andresen :)

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Sponsor:Regina Riddle
Contest Name:Haiku "aha" Moment
Deadline:9/1/2014 


- Thanks for my 3rd place in contest -

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Delice Arleen Skelly

May 20, 2015 at 4:25 PM

Anne, slowly reading through your selection of wonderful haiku.... Just love the ideas that can be expressed in three short lines~Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2015 at 4:12 AM

- Many of my small verse .... are being rewritten to a Haiku :) - A great way to say what you mean :) - Thank you for your visit, Delice - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

September 4, 2014 at 8:26 AM

Congratulations for the 3rd Place, dear!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 4, 2014 at 8:42 AM

- Thank you for comments and enjoyable visit, Archana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

August 13, 2014 at 11:32 AM

This is an ahhhh haiku Anne Lise. No other words needed. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 13, 2014 at 12:21 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit,dear Phyllis ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

August 13, 2014 at 8:26 AM

Sweetness, sensuality, and romance rolled into a few short lines. Love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 13, 2014 at 8:43 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Monterey my friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

August 11, 2014 at 3:51 AM

i enjoy haiku. this one is a gem. thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 11, 2014 at 6:18 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

August 10, 2014 at 5:55 PM

Very cool, I enjoyed this, grats on your win !

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 11, 2014 at 2:14 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Casarah :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

August 10, 2014 at 9:45 AM

A splendid haiku you creatively penned my dear friend Anne Lise. I like it so much! Big congrats on your great win & thank u s much for sharing! Big Hugs and cheers! By the way, I'm so glad that you've seen my gift to u. Finally, i was able to post it. Only that I changed the title. I'm so sorry again for the delay. Thank u so much as well my very dear friend Anne! You're also one of God's gifts to me. God bless u and your loved ones always! Many hugs! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 10, 2014 at 11:59 AM

- You did the best you could ..... posted several times without success - P-S's fault !!! - The new title is super :) - Thanks for visiting and congrats, my dear friend Leonora :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 9, 2014 at 9:25 PM

If I didn't say it earlier. A Big belated Birthday wish to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 10, 2014 at 4:40 AM

- Thank you, Andrea <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Mohn

August 9, 2014 at 11:43 AM

Great emotive haiku Anne...congrats :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 11:45 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

August 9, 2014 at 10:05 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed reading this beautiful romantic haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 11:38 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

August 9, 2014 at 6:17 AM

Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Your visit to my page with congrats was uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 6:18 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Sara :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson

August 9, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Love your aha moment. Best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 5:19 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Linda (3rd place in contest) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 4:29 AM

congrats Anne, Great feelings. Thanks for sharing

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 5:10 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Sam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Marvin G. Celestial

August 8, 2014 at 9:04 PM

This one is best haiku anne-lise!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 5:10 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Marvin ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 8, 2014 at 7:20 PM

Weeee.. That's so endearing..:) nice one

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 5:09 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Olive ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser

August 8, 2014 at 4:08 PM

To live your words, and send me on my way. For I'll meet you at Heaven's Gate. Terrific Anne Lise, simply terrific. Have a lovely weekend - James :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 9, 2014 at 5:07 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, James ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kamal Raj Dahal

August 8, 2014 at 2:59 PM

Dear Anne, You have written so beautiful poem. It portraits full meaning of love and ecstasy. Your message is here that true love only opens the door of happiness to anyone for their comfortable and joyful life. Thanks and regards. Kamal

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 3:05 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Kamal ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

August 8, 2014 at 1:28 PM

big applause on your win, dear anne... hugs to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 1:33 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, sweet Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 8, 2014 at 12:39 PM

Wow lovely haiku Anne Lise ! Congrats on ur win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 12:54 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Dr. Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Divya Upadhyay

August 8, 2014 at 1:54 AM

Wow! Moments of love and haunt. Really a great combination. Very well-written! Cheers, Divya

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 12:49 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku,Divya - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 1:12 AM

Very deep write. congrats on the win, Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 12:53 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Dr. Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Craig Glenister

August 8, 2014 at 12:28 AM

Beautiful Anne..thank you..so heartfelt

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 12:49 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Craig - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2014 at 12:04 AM

awesome to see this one again. BIG congrats for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 12:53 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jeremy Martin

August 7, 2014 at 9:45 PM

Steamy! I like it. ~Jeremy

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 12:50 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Jeremy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

August 7, 2014 at 2:52 PM

Aha! So this is what haunting love amounts to! Must be quite an unnerving experience. I can see two sides of love here....one desirable....the other repulsive. Take your pick (but then, my mind runs ahead of me...). /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 12:51 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my Haiku, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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