Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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30.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 285 - Rain In Norway -

                                         clouds become heavy
                                   a complex rhythm of the rain -
                                          my beloved sleeps

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I Am Anaya August 1, 2023 at 5:17 PM And its mist makes us sleepy, great (Gif) and haiku. I don't understand what the X 285 means. :)

Kim Rodrigues July 31, 2023 at 11:05 AM Anne-Lise, I love the pic you posted with your poem. Perhaps you were wide awake as your beloved sleeps. Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 11:36 AM :))) - you're right ... I'm often up at night while everyone else is sleeping, Kim - hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot July 31, 2023 at 7:06 AM nice volta in this haiku..good luck in the contest, and thanks for commenting on my work :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 9:54 AM - Thank you, Charlotte :) -

Joanna Daniel July 30, 2023 at 10:37 PM Lovely!! Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:50 AM - Thank you, Jo :) -

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 30, 2023 at 5:11 PM Wonderful! The words, and the graphic! Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:50 AM - Thank you, Mala :) -

The Situation July 30, 2023 at 4:12 PM It allows restfull sleep. I miss it. Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:50 AM - Thank you, T.S. :) -

Sara Kendrick July 30, 2023 at 3:57 PM Ahh!!! The sleep induced by the steady soft sound of rain. Thanks for sharing this nice one and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:50 AM - Thank you, Sara :) -

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 30, 2023 at 2:48 PM An awesome haiku, Anne-Lise. Love the graphic, too. ;) Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:49 AM - Thank you, Evelyn :) -

Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2023 at 2:37 PM What a fun/cute ~ write/picture. Love It. "Good Luck" I also did rain. Have a great day/week................... Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:49 AM - Thank you, Paula :) -

Ilene Bauer July 30, 2023 at 2:26 PM nicely done, anne-lise! best of luck in the contest... Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2023 at 5:49 AM - Thank you, Ilene :) -