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cold winter's pale dream
                                    whistle wordless melodies -
                                       snowmelt spring's birth








10.02.2023
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Phyllis Babcock

February 20, 2023 at 9:12 AM

Lovely picture which makes me wish for spring. Just hitting the -20's again but sunny outside. love phyl

Joseph P. DiMino

February 11, 2023 at 6:25 AM

For sure; we cherish the blossoms and bird songs of spring. Very nicely worded.

Victor Buhagiar

February 11, 2023 at 2:50 AM

Great imagery, Anne Lise. Hugs.

Joanna Daniel

February 11, 2023 at 12:05 AM

Lovely, Anne-lise:)

Heidi Sands

February 10, 2023 at 2:46 PM

Beautifully written, Haiku! :)

Stephan McBride

February 10, 2023 at 2:37 PM

Love it, I know you are probably ready for spring : ). : ). I am still trying to see winter here lol, crazy it's been cold like a couple days it seems here, hugs take care

Speaks Volumes

February 10, 2023 at 1:53 PM

I love your work Anne-Lise. I have never lived in a place where it snowed, but reading your rhymes make it come to life. This is another lovely picture you have painted. I guess there are times when the coming of spring is welcomed? Thanks for bringing your lovely words to the screen for us all.