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- Haiku X 25 - Whiskey -

The loneliness weighs

        Whiskey bottle is emptied

        Doomed to go to hell







       05.03.2014
       A-L Andresen :)

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Ugwu Cornelius Chidera

June 18, 2014 at 5:29 PM

nice haiku!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2014 at 3:34 AM

- Thank you Cornel, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Margaret Okubo

May 26, 2014 at 1:09 PM

Great haiku Anne. Vivid.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 26, 2014 at 1:19 PM

- Thanks you Margaret, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

May 19, 2014 at 5:50 AM

Interesting poem; like the best Haiku this can be interpreted in several ways: Is the poet drinking because s/he is lonely and will then be condemned because of that act or Has the poet already been sentenced to hell and the sup of firey amber liquid is his/her swansong? Either way, great poem! Thanks for stopping by my poems!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 19, 2014 at 7:13 AM

- Have not thought much about it .... difficult to give you an answer, John :) - Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Amy Green

April 6, 2014 at 8:14 AM

That's about it, at least you feel it the next day! Like this lil' write.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 6, 2014 at 8:15 AM

- Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, Amy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

March 31, 2014 at 1:36 PM

Well I don't see you going to hell :) nice haiku though. glad you liked my The Dancer, it was from 2011, xoxo my friend always :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 31, 2014 at 1:39 PM

- Do not like whiskey ..... terrible smell and taste :))) - Thanks for visiting and enjoyable comment, my friend Debbie :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bauke Kamstra

March 21, 2014 at 9:21 AM

Oh dear, a very bad day. Nicely done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 21, 2014 at 1:29 PM

- Thanks for visiting and enjoyable comment, my new soup friend Bauke :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins

March 14, 2014 at 9:15 AM

You nailed in three short lines. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 14, 2014 at 9:26 AM

- Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, Kathryn :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

March 13, 2014 at 4:37 PM

Yes, and the more you drink the lonelier you get. Good work. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 14, 2014 at 4:01 AM

- True !! - Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, Daver :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit

March 11, 2014 at 11:39 PM

Booze makes you lose. It's not the right road to choose. Those who take it have no clues. You will pay more than just your dues. It wil never be a cure for the blues.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 12, 2014 at 2:41 AM

- Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, Robert :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paddi March

March 11, 2014 at 1:20 PM

AAAAAH! this haiku made me go try one for myself. I posted one today but i couldn't remember where i had seen this one so my haiku is deadicated to you with all its faults and with the full knowledge that you are worth far more than my grubby poem. I thought your haiku was good. Thank you for your comment on my poem "Anne" It was gentle and tender

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 11, 2014 at 2:22 PM

- Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, Paddi :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson

March 10, 2014 at 3:50 PM

Yeh, make money :/ At what cost huh? Peace. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2014 at 4:34 PM

- I'm not fond of alkehol ..... do not like the taste :) - Give me a glass of water - it's free :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson

March 10, 2014 at 1:59 PM

Let's hope that God's forgiving grace can save us from ourselves. The question is, is why is there so much liquer on the shelves. The power of 25 was truly maxed with your haiku Anne. Peace. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2014 at 2:04 PM

- Money to make .........business ....- Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, Robert. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson

March 8, 2014 at 2:09 PM

I loved your Haiku. Best wishes Linda x

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2014 at 3:01 PM

- Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 Linda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

March 7, 2014 at 12:46 PM

I'll just make more as I surge padt the gates of hell!!! Xool write Anne! J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 3:37 PM

- Thanks you, for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 Justin :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

March 7, 2014 at 12:47 PM

Oooooppsss, burst past,

Kayod5 Kayode

March 7, 2014 at 10:10 AM

A great one Anne , I must say I really enjoy it.Immense thanks for all your visits to my page.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 11:42 AM

- Thanks you, Kayod5 for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Tidd

March 7, 2014 at 9:38 AM

A good title for this haiku would be "Bender" :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 11:41 AM

- Thanks you, Jim for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

March 7, 2014 at 8:54 AM

(^_______^) nice haiku friend Anne. Have a blessed day always. hugs from the land of smile ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 11:40 AM

- Thanks you, Maria for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

March 7, 2014 at 8:08 AM

beautiful haiku Anne Lise hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 11:39 AM

- Thanks you, Shadow for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Manny Paras

March 6, 2014 at 11:05 PM

A bit late but thank you for placing my valentine poem in your list, Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 2:32 AM

- Thanks you for the nice visits , Manny ! - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

March 6, 2014 at 10:45 PM

here, the lenten season begins, anne.. have a non-hellish friday!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 2:30 AM

... It's the weekend ..... hurray ... it's Friday!! - :)))

Juli- Michelle

March 6, 2014 at 9:02 PM

Wow. I agree with Peter to some degree. No one on this earth is going to hell. We are as good as we are evil. Mistakes do not define our lives. I hope all is well. great write! -Juli-Michelle

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 7, 2014 at 2:28 AM

- Life can feel like "hell" - you are not happy - problems and loneliness disappear not by "drowning" them with alkehol ...- Thanks you for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, Juli-Michelle :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

March 6, 2014 at 12:28 PM

It's the loneliness that bothers me...but drink does not solve anything. to hell with the "spirits" of evil :) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 6, 2014 at 12:41 PM

- The world is full of lonely people - sad :((( - Thanks you Paul for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

March 6, 2014 at 10:56 AM

So little says so much..Nicely done Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 6, 2014 at 11:16 AM

- Thanks you Ken for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

March 6, 2014 at 9:33 AM

Oh! a nice realization inflicts in to the horizon of real loneliness. Nice creation. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 6, 2014 at 11:15 AM

- Thanks for the nice visits and comments on my Haiku X 25, friend bl. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

March 6, 2014 at 8:59 AM

no one would like to go to hell..( alone)..lol!~ =D ..I so agree with you Anne Lise..!! this haiku deserves a two thumbs up!! ..Salute' ..^__^

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 6, 2014 at 11:12 AM

- Use your head when you drink alcohol ........... important! - Thanks for the nice visit - and thanks for your opinion and comments, AiyaH my friend. - oxox // Anne - Lise :)

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