- Haiku X 23 - Christmas 2013 -

Finally perfect
           high in the top the green tree
           The christmas star shines

           The lights are shining
           all the children should sleep now 
           Christmas  tomorrow

            No children crying
            a night with good sleep sweet dreams
            Gifts under the tree




    
                 

                                The wish is old and yet so real.
                              A peaceful Christmas I wish for you !



23.12.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
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Pettit Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 11:57 AM
I was a little over a month too late to read this fine work. Hope you had a nice Christmas too.
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 12:10 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Nagpal Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 5:12 AM
Such a sweet description of my favourite festival.
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 7:55 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Archana. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Firstly, I say truly sorry to read this beautiful poem lately. You are very simple having a nice holy heart, I feel. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 7:27 AM
- Better late than never .... do not be sorry !!! - Thanks for the enjoyable visit bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Canama Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Oh! I love these haiku series...
Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 5:51 AM
- Thanks for the enjoyable visit Estela - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and best wishes to you and your family for the new year my friend. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:05 PM
- Thanks for the enjoyable visit Phyllis - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Just to say Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and to your family friend Anne. I've been very busy in many things so I been away for days here. Cheers ;) :) :)
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 10:46 AM
- Thanks for the enjoyable visit Maria - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Austin Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 9:26 AM
I love Haiku. These are wonderful, bring back childhood. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 10:46 AM
- Thanks for the enjoyable visit Daver - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:42 PM
A wonderful set of haikus, Anne-Lise. You expressed the joy of the Christmas season, so well here! I hope that you had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!...Thank you very much for the great comments and well wishes! :)
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 6:55 AM
- Thanks for the enjoyable visit Kelly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 7:17 PM
what a beautiful haiku series...i hope your christmas was filled with the same sort of magic :)
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 6:54 AM
- Thanks for the enjoyable visit Sandra - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Goller Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 1:34 PM
A beautiful Christmas Haiku,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 2:32 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Erich - - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
K. Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Such festive cheer in your haiku, Anne-Lise! Thank you for passing by and for your Christmas wishes, so nice to hear from you. Î wish you and your lovely family the best. Pls send my hugs to them as well!
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 10:58 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments - I will! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 12:57 AM
Beautiful Christmas poem. I hope you had a great Christmas.
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 3:49 AM
- Thank you, Jon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Morrison Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 5:31 PM
A beautiful Christmas piece! Well Done Anne Lise! WellDone!
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 4:32 AM
- Thank you, Kim ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 5:00 PM
I hope that Christmas treated very well. Thank you for your Well Wishes on my “Southern Christmas”. Having posted it so late I was not expecting any responses, so am overwhelmed. It has further buoyed my Festive Season. Enjoy the holiday, Scott
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 4:31 AM
- Thank you, Scott ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 1:55 PM
Great haikus Anne, so very true the wish goes on, very well done,Merry Christmas,Carl
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:50 PM
- Thank you, Carl ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Oyewole Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 10:35 AM
This is really lovely haikus for Christmas. Well done and merry Christmas to you and yours!
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:49 PM
- Thank you, Abdulhafeez ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Love this Anne Lise!Merry Christmas to you and yours too!
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:49 PM
- Thank you, Kash ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 2:39 PM
Have a great XMAS. I just got back to the U.S.A. today after a couple of weeks in the city of David and Jesus. Sweet holiday verse here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:47 PM
- Thank you, Matthew ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 1:45 PM
have a beautiful love filled christmas and a joyful new year
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:46 PM
- Thank you, Liam ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Yamin Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 1:22 PM
Great Haikus on Xmas. Merry Christmas and a very happy and prosperous New Year. Yes, Anne perhaps it is the poets block. However, I have been busy having my third book titled Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi -Stars & Gems published in USA by Createspace of Amazon. The book can be viewed on Amazon.com and on the Kindle. I have also been undergoing treatment for health problems. May be you will see me more active on poetrysoup in days to come. Love. -Mohammad
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:46 PM
- Thank you, Mohammad ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Flannery Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 11:24 AM
Beautiful Haiku that paints a wonderful picture Anne Lise. I hope You and Yours all have a Blessed Christmas Season. And thank you for your nice comments.
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:45 PM
- Thank you, Vincent ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Undertaker Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 10:09 AM
Wonderful poem Anne Lisa.Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.(: ) Jenish.
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:44 PM
- Thank you, Jenish ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Goff Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 8:22 AM
Anne Lise....you are a remarkable woman! Thank you for your warm wishes! And may God Bless you and yours this joyful season! Love, jimbo
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:44 PM
- Thank you, Jimbo ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Campi Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 6:46 AM
A Very Merry Christmas to You and Yours and a Happy New Year, Jancarl
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 2:43 PM
- Thank you, Jancarl ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Choi Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 5:02 AM
Lovely as ever Ann-Lise! Merry xmass sweetheart.
Andresen Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 5:05 AM
- Thank you, Alfonce ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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