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- Haiku X 235 - Owl -

its feathered beauty
                                a vigilant night worker -
                                           mouse a real treat







                                       ~ 12.11.2022 ~
                                 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Mcintosh Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 4:03 AM
I love owls and your write. God bless you. Love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 5:33 AM
- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 1:55 AM
Short and sweet and finely done. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:44 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
George Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 1:40 AM
The owl, its nocturnal existence and its predatory habits--- all beautifully expressed in your haiku, Smile~! All the Best...in the contest ! Love and hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:44 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 2:46 PM
so cute. loved the poem and the picture with it.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs
Ashley Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 1:31 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, your lovely haiku captures the nature and the beauty of the owl perfectly. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Susan :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 3:38 AM
Anne-Lise, wonderful imagery, best of luck in the contest!
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Tania :) - hugs
Horsman Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 8:45 PM
My very favourite bird, Anne-Lise, love the poem. Harry.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Harry :) - hugs
Wolf Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 8:27 PM
That 3rd line sure caught me off guard, Anne-Lise. Brought a smile to my face. Thanks, gw
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Gershon :) - hugs
Bauer Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 3:45 PM
This is great, Anne-Lise! Best of luck in the contest…
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:42 AM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 3:31 PM
I find Owls really beautiful and interesting birds! You have portrayed a perfect picture of this wild, nocturnal creature.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:42 AM
- Thank you very much, Mala :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 3:15 PM
I can already envisage what's about to happen. The suspense you created in this tiny poem is unsurpassed. Enjoyed.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:42 AM
- Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I enjoy the owls of the night and you have described him/she just right. Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:42 AM
- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 2:41 PM
Beautiful birds Anne, have only seen about two in the wild and that was driving to work at 03.30 in the morning. Tom
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:41 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs
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