Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 231 - Bewitching Autumn -

colored in copper
                                    autumn's most gorgeous outfit -
                                                flirting responsive


                                    autumn's red lipstick
                                    feminine and attractive -
                                                  sleep in the same bed







30.09.2022
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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James Inman October 28, 2022 at 5:47 PM I was recently in a small town in Tennessee, USA for my oldest daughters wedding. It's located at the foot of the Smokey Mountains, a US federal park covering the eastern part of Tennessee and western North Carolina. The leaves were beautiful. Yellows, reds and golds stretched as far as you could see, and wild life abounding, including coyote, elk, chipmunk, squirrels and even a visit from a family of black bear outside of my daughters condo balcony, a mother and four older cubs. Nice write.

Victor Buhagiar October 1, 2022 at 12:12 PM Loved your haiku. I could not help but smile. You're such a dear. Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:50 PM - Glad it put a smile on your face, Victor :) - ...many thanks :) - hugs

Suzanne Delaney October 1, 2022 at 5:30 AM Beautiful haiku, Anne Lise: I think Mother Nature in red is her most bewitching. SuZ Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:51 PM - Mother nature has many beautiful colors ... thank you very much, SuZ :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2022 at 12:24 AM GREAT images, Sunshine! Long time, no see!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:52 PM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit September 30, 2022 at 2:03 PM Your poem is adorned in most beautiful words, Anne-Lise. A definite FAVE from me for this blend of autumnal colors inviting romance in your ornate descriptions: colored in copper autumn's most gorgeous outfit - flirting responsive--autumn's red lipstick--- feminine and attractive - Simply wonderful! Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:53 PM - Much appreciated ... ...many thanks, Vijay :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues September 30, 2022 at 12:54 PM A beautiful and inviting picture of Autumn! Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:54 PM - Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis September 30, 2022 at 11:23 AM Bewitching Haikus that depict Autumn's royal gown, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:54 PM - Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman September 30, 2022 at 10:37 AM Delightful Anne-Lise and so filled with images that dance like autumn reflections on a lake! Thank you for this beautiful portrait of autumn. Blessings and a hug. Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:56 PM - I'm not an "autumn person" ... but, this autumn has been beautiful ... - Many thanks for your comment, Sam - hugs

Jim Slaughter September 30, 2022 at 9:13 AM "autumn's most gorgeous outfit", indeed! I really like this one, too, SS...and I love the picture. Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:58 PM - So nice ... a pleasure to share with you, Jim ... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet September 30, 2022 at 9:13 AM Great haiku sequence, Anne-Lise. You captured a wonderful scenery of autumn shades. Hugs and regards Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2022 at 12:56 PM - Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs