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- Haiku X 219 - it's snowing -


                                     branches weight of snow
                                  cold wind and frozen crystals -
                                         white porcelain dolls






             
                                                16/01/2022
                                        Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                     Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
                                      Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
                                     howmanysyllables.com 5-7-5
                                         2nd place in the contest
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Krutsinger Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 9:25 AM
I used to collect these little figurines. Now I do not remember what they were called, but I am glad to see them again. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise! How beautiful! I can relate to snow very much! Love and hugs ~ Mala
Babcock Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 9:50 AM
This is a gem of a haiku. love phyl
Skelly Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Anne Congratulations on your magical snow haiku..Delice
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Goes so well with the picture and i see it's a winner. Congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love this pretty write and picture. Your snow friends look like they are staying warm. This would make a wonderful card. Have a blessed day with hugs..............
Merryman Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 12:31 PM
That's a chilly haiku, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Calasibetta Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 5:20 AM
So charming a write! Congratulations on your win! Blessings, Paulette
Horsman Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 10:31 PM
Lost in the snow, runs through my mind reading this gem, Anne-Lise
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:41 PM
Great haiku with a snowing imagery. Congratulations!
George Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations on your win dear Anne...! Keep penning wonderful haikus
Leiser Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 7:20 PM
Wonderful and creative haiku, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! :)
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 4:56 PM
Very Nicely Done, congratulations on your placement.
Ball Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Love this Anne-Lise. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB PS soup mail
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations on your second place win with this clever haiku. Blessings xxoo
Sambourne Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 1:55 PM
Very finely penned. Congratulations, Brian
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Ain’t this a picture Anne-Lise, frozen porcelain dolls, perhaps inside an ice palace, beautiful haiku, and deserving high placement, cheers David
Lawless Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Beautiful....and the final line perfect
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 5:30 PM
- Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Lovely, creative haiku Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win. Sending you warm winter blessings. We are hoping for rain but a little snow would be great!
Rose  Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:11 AM
What a splendid scene you describe, I'm looking out my window now and picturing pretty things such as these, but all I see is snow lol, nice one Sunshine
Y. Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day-Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your silver placement with your beautiful poem, loved the last line!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 12:47 PM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Your images are always delightful, Anne-Lise. We have some of your frozen crystals here today where I live. Eastern US is under winter wrath since yesterday.
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 8:13 AM
- We have no snow or ice ... just a lot of wind and rain, Vijay - Stay warm, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:23 AM
Very nice scene Anne Lise. Well done :)
M  Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:12 AM
Lovely poem Anne-Lise and I love the picture soooo cute! Debx
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