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- Haiku X 218 - Moss Green -

Haiku

                                    with borrowed feathers
                                  the ancient tree of wisdom -
                                          sky is the limit




                                          In Norwegian

                                         med lånte fjær
                                  det eldgamle visdoms tre -
                                      grensen - himmelen





                                          12/01/2022
                                   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Andrews Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 8:48 PM
very nice ;-)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 12:54 PM
A beautiful write and moss picture. Moss covering the ground/tree is so pretty. I like the way to added it "In Norwegian." Very creative. Have a blessed day/week writing away, hugs................
Andresen Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:05 PM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 11:30 PM
ahhhh so pretty; last line is my favorite also.
Liguori Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:55 PM
I don't exactly get it, but this is indeed one of the best poems I've ever had the joyous opportunity to read. Thank you
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Love that last line!
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:40 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 5:09 PM
This is a beautiful haiku, Anne-Lise. Picture perfect! Hugs // Charlie
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 4:40 AM
- Thank you very much, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Great imagery , Sunshine. Blessing to you thorough out your new year my friend.
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 4:40 AM
- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Simply lovely.... I wonder from where you have picked up such an apt image ! Love and hugs, Anne
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 8:02 AM
- Thank you very much Valsa, I download almost all the pictures from pinterest.com :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, You penned such a lovely verse. I echo what Connie said. Well done. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a good day- Alexis
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 8:04 AM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - Have a nice day you too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Your carefully chosen words combined with this stunning photo make an enchanting haiga Anne-Lise. Of course your haiku stands alone too in its beauty. Blessings xxoo
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:31 AM
- Thanks, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:34 AM
With your words, Anne-Lise, you have created a magnificent scene. Great picture too// Hugs
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:30 AM
- Thanks, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 5:10 AM
I see it aiming for sky. Superbly done...both photo and poem.
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:29 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 4:56 AM
I like this one. Very descriptive and expressive work. I am glad you shared in your native language. Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 5:04 AM
- Free choice ... English or Norwegian, Sara :))) - Thank you very much for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 4:22 AM
Great picture and poem. Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 5:02 AM
- Thanks, Victor - I assume you read it in Norwegian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Love this sweet friend. God bless you. Love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:33 AM
- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:04 AM
You paint a beautiful scene with your words Anne. Tom
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:25 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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