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- Haiku X 217 - Eyesome -

HAIKU



                                   with clear pearls of dew
                          trembling steam beam from the sun -
                                      silver-plated bed


                                                ***

                                         In Norwegian

                                    med klare duggperler
                            skjelvende dampstråle fra solen -
                                      en sølvbelagt seng




                                            11/01/2022
                                    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 11:30 PM
I do not know which I like better - the poem or the photo. Is it yours too?
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 9:20 AM
I like this one. I enjoy seeing those dew drops or raindrops. If you look closely, those drops are like little mirrors reflecting the area around them. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:49 AM
- I am very fascinated by dew / water drops ... so beautiful, Sara :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Pretty!
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:47 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 3:52 AM
I see the glistening pearls, not silver plated, but golden plated in the amber beams of the sun ! A beauty to behold, Anne !
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:47 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, Your haiku is lovely. The photo and poem complement each other well. Nice touch writing it in Norwegian as well. Great job- Alexis
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:46 AM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 12:51 AM
A masterpiece of beauty, my dearest, Anne-Lise! Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:46 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 4:32 PM
Oh! I'm aware of the pearls. Anne-Lise, you've written a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:45 AM
- Thank you very much for reading, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise. Love the pic. I too wish I could hear you recite it in Norwegian. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:45 AM
- It sounds more beautiful in English, Judy :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:02 AM
this is very beautiful, anne-lise! wish i could hear it in norwegian...
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:44 AM
- I want to read it to you, another day :) - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Oh! I see the pearls. Beautiful poem, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:42 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 9:05 AM
I read it in Norwegian and understood nothing :) Just joking. Your English version is stupendous. So is your picture. Great poetry. Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:42 AM
- Of course you read it in Norwegian :))) - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Evans Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:25 AM
Beautiful, Anne-Lise! Have a good day.
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:41 AM
- Thank you very much, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:42 AM
Beautiful image Anne, hope your week is going well. Tom
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:53 AM
- We have had a beautiful weather today, Tom ... 6 + degrees and sunshine ... it sparkled in silver pearls everywhere :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 11, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Beautiful imagery. Peter
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:38 AM
- Thank you very much, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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