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- Haiku X 209 - Summer - Lazy

hammock in the shade

                                  views to crystal clear water   ~

                                        new cut grass smells good








27/06/2021
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Summer Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
5th place in the contest
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Gentile Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 4:32 AM
Perfect summer imagery Anne-Lise! I really enjoyed xxoo
Jayasankar Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Such a beautiful imagery created dear Anne... Am so so happy you are back to writing poems... Sorry my friend...I was not active in Soup for some days now... Enjoyed reading.. Love n hugs... ~ Ani
Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 10:38 AM
These are truly wonderful images of summer Anne-Lise...newly mown grass, a cozy hammock and views of water! Wonderful and soothing. I'm now ready for a nap in the hammock! Congratulations on your win! A fav for me.
Hinshaw Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise! So smooth and relaxing! Thanks for your kind comments re my win - Bob
Skelly Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 2:23 AM
You captured an image of peace...The smell of new cut grass, divine...Delice
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 1:16 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Delice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your winning placement with your relaxing haiku!
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:16 PM
- Many thanks for my win in your contest, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 12:13 PM
I am back with "Congratulations" on this win. A peaceful write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs.................
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:17 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:20 AM
sure feels like a nice lazy summer!! Enjoyed this one. Congrats, Sunshine
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:18 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Alex Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:17 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Alex :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 9:37 AM
REMINDS ME of my YOUTH..,BEAUTIFUL CANDY CRUSH, PANGIE XX
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 1:15 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Pangie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Great haiku my friend, reminded me of the last time I was in a hammock-about 30 years ago! Beautiful picture and beautiful haiku.. A fav.. Brought back sweet memories of a time long ago.
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 1:14 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments and the fave, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Radice Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 10:58 AM
dine ord er innbegrepet av fred og ro Sunshine. Skål - Gary :) Google translation used :) Your words are the epitome of peace and tranquility Sushine. Cheers - Gary
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:04 AM
- Even one: "Å" - Ikke dårlig, ikke perfekt :) - I use google but it is not completely perfect - Thank you very much for your sweet comments, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 8:22 AM
What a beautiful write and picture. You can find me in the hammock with a book and some ice tea. Have a blessed day writing away............
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 9:38 AM
- You are welcome to enjoy my hammock Paula, thank you very much for your lovely comment ... have a blessed day you too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Seeker Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Perfect lazy, invigorating setting!
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 9:36 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:57 AM
I love the scent of fresh cut grass, and the hammock sounds heavenly Sunshine:)
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:22 PM
- I think I leave the hammock ... but, love the scent of freshly cut lawn, Vie Rose :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:49 AM
lovely and calming Haiku, Anne-Lise, I enjoyed this one: hammock in the shade .../ my best wishes for the contest, peace, and hugs, my good friend
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:20 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments and good wishes, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:49 AM
Lovely, Anne-lise:) I too can smell it in my mind:)
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Thank you very much for your comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 10:34 PM
I really love this Haiku, so descriptive I felt like going to lie down in it. Very creatively penned Anne Lise my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:19 PM
- Looks very comfortable, dear Jenny ... but, I would have trouble getting both up and out of a hammock :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 10:19 PM
I feel like sitting on the hammock near water and smelling grass. Awesome entry
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:16 PM
- I have a view to the sea, but no hammock :) - Thank you very much for your comments, Rama :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise. Summer time at it's best. God Bless, JB PS How are you?
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:14 PM
- Still cold here ... I hope summer comes, Judy :) - I an ok :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 12:07 PM
A great way to spend an afternoon. :0)
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:13 PM
- Definitely, Richard :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 1:55 AM
A great scene. Good for you to rest after all the pain. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:12 PM
- I'm afraid I would fall out ... I never tried a hammock, Victor :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Oh I do love that smell... freshly mown lawn in summer is awesome. Love it. God bless you always, friend, Love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:10 PM
- Thank you very much Gina, for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 3:51 PM
Dreamy and lovely. A fine haiku, Anne-Lise. :D
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:09 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Much joy in your summer hues, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:09 PM
- Yes, if it comes ... I'm still waiting - Thank you very much for your comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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