Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 194 - Snow White -

a frosted flower
                                  language of winter silence ~
                                           magical and white

                                            velvet rim frozen
                                  hard struggle of existence ~
                                             in the glass coffin







                                               13/01/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Juliet Ligon January 21, 2021 at 12:15 PM Creative haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2021 at 5:17 AM - Thank you very much Juliet, for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger January 17, 2021 at 12:56 PM “Glass coffin” is perfect! Wow! Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2021 at 5:16 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 16, 2021 at 1:51 PM Wow, I like this one very much, Anne Lise! Especially the reference to a "glass coffin." I never thought of frost that way. Excellent and another fave! Hugs, Carolyn

Constance La France January 16, 2021 at 11:22 AM Anne-Lise, absolutely beautiful, wow _Constance Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2021 at 5:16 AM - Constance, thank you very much for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy January 16, 2021 at 7:32 AM Anne-Lise, this is awesome. "Glass coffin"--great metaphor! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2021 at 5:15 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JC Brul January 15, 2021 at 5:54 PM So beautiful! Keep coming! a fave! Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2021 at 1:34 AM - JCB, thank you very much for your lovely comment and the fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing January 15, 2021 at 5:35 PM My word this is GORGEOUS!!! True, you are a VERY gifted poetess :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2021 at 1:33 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds January 15, 2021 at 8:39 AM A beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise, exquisite words, great imagination... Hugs Belle:-) Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 8:44 AM - Belle, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 15, 2021 at 7:18 AM Wow! A great Haiku, Sunshine, your imagery is just stunning. Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 8:43 AM - Eve, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh January 14, 2021 at 12:12 PM Reality mixed in with fantasy, such is life, such is a great haiku, and not too bad a poet either, couldn’t resist that, brilliant cheers David Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 8:43 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues January 14, 2021 at 11:53 AM Oooh that pic lends it to your final line...in the glass coffin! Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 8:43 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands January 14, 2021 at 9:12 AM Beautiful Haiku! Very nice :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2021 at 10:07 AM - Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball January 14, 2021 at 5:32 AM A beautiful Haiku Anne-Lise and the picture brings it to life. Great job. God Bless, JB I like to walk my dogs at midnight too. Wouldn't go alone at that hour. Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2021 at 7:12 AM - We go together, Judy :) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 14, 2021 at 4:56 AM Haiku of outstanding beauty my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2021 at 7:11 AM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham January 13, 2021 at 2:50 PM Brr I can feel winters chill, but even winter has its beauty. Hope you're well Anne. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2021 at 4:18 AM - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2021 at 2:22 PM Great vocabulary Anne-Lise~~language of winter silence~~ and~~ struggle of existence. Your photo speaks through your words. Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2021 at 4:17 AM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar January 13, 2021 at 1:12 PM Your fantasy is great. Loved the picture and the haikus. ~~ Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2021 at 4:17 AM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy January 13, 2021 at 11:33 AM Very nice! Lovely nature.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2021 at 11:46 AM - Abdullah, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan January 13, 2021 at 11:29 AM Frosted and frozen, such is the beauty of nature. Your photo is as lovely as your lines, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2021 at 11:45 AM - Beautiful but cold, thank you very much Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison January 13, 2021 at 11:23 AM amazing imagery and the picture is fantastic, well penned Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2021 at 11:44 AM - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)