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- Haiku X 156 - Bumble Bees -

a drop of honey

                                carpet in a rocking chair -

                                          ... bumblebee music


 
                                    plump - a bit furry

                                         no pollination - no plants -

                                   -  save the bumble bees







14.06.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Kereopa Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 5:43 AM
So true, I have a bee garden too
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 8:24 AM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Georgia :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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July 12, 2019 at 3:51 PM
I have my bumble bee and he comes very early in spring so I get my flowers early so he can enjoy. This year a few more in my raspberries so he brought some friends. Have a lovely summer and meaningful poem my friend. love phyl
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July 14, 2019 at 1:40 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Labyrinth Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 5:40 AM
scary thought of a world without Bees, I read somewhere a few years ago that if all the bees in the world disappeared, i.e. became extinct, humanity would have 4 years to survive.
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:23 PM
- Thank you very much, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Labyrinth Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 5:42 AM
Dancing with Bees / https://youtu.be/vpV9jGSRacg
Proxenos Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 1:50 AM
So sad if they become extinct, for what will humanity do - we must stop using insecticides and pesticides before it is too late dear friend - we need them to pollinate our plants! Great write Anne-Lise. Hugs, Jennifer.
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July 9, 2019 at 12:22 PM
- Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:13 PM
Would be so sad to lose them and all of the flowers they help bring to life... I like the sweet way you express such an important message in this poem... Nicely done Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:22 PM
- Thank you very much, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:57 AM
I am doing my bit. I have bumblebees, honey bees, and wasps cloistered in clumps around my yard. I have three flower gardens!
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:22 PM
- Thank you very much, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Faulkner Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 3:28 PM
Stirring message, well penned, we must save the sweet bumble bees!
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2019 at 6:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Emotive and interesting write! Nice one, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2019 at 5:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Bees I love , found one in the garden, took him in and he came back to life. Took him outside and he flew off. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2019 at 5:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Nice one Anne-Lise. Save the bees! :)
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2019 at 5:58 AM
- Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Wise words indeed, we must save them Anne-lise - without the bees as pollinators mankind cannot survive:-( hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2019 at 5:58 AM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Yes indeed..save the bees! Well said, Anne-Lise.
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June 17, 2019 at 5:57 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Two natural Haikus ...to honey with love...Let's save the Bees...
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2019 at 5:57 AM
- Thank you very much, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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