Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 148 - the Peril of False Spring -

a single small bud

                                  don't say spring is in the air -

                                  snowdrops drowned in snow









15/03/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Writing Challenge 2 - Haiku- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart
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2nd place in the contes

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Constance La France March 18, 2019 at 10:58 AM Anne-lise, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful haiku and I love the image too ~ Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 2:31 PM - Many thanks for my win in your contest, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham March 18, 2019 at 4:39 AM Back with congrats on your win Sunshine, gone really cold here again, brrr. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 2:30 PM - Many thanks Tom, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong March 17, 2019 at 11:13 PM Congratulations on your wonderful winning haiku Anne-Lise. xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:37 AM - Many thanks Connie, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 17, 2019 at 7:08 PM Hope we don't get snow to destroy the spring flowers:-( many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:36 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour March 17, 2019 at 6:54 PM Many congrats Anne-Lise on your sweet Haiku with kindest thoughts Ann xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:36 AM - Many thanks Ann, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 17, 2019 at 6:44 PM Great Haiku, Sunshine, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:35 AM - Many thanks Eve, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2019 at 6:28 PM Back AGAIN with more congrats, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:35 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin March 17, 2019 at 3:28 PM Wonderfully written, and so true, congratulations on your winning placement! Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:34 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll March 17, 2019 at 3:13 PM Congratulations on your win, Anne- lise. Warmest Wishes~ Warren Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:33 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 17, 2019 at 2:57 PM here again to send my sweet congrats on your fine win, anne... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2019 at 1:33 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Castellenas March 17, 2019 at 6:23 AM A wonderful photo. The miracle of nature. A flower. Words and words. Amazing. Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2019 at 8:50 AM - Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 16, 2019 at 4:50 PM Marvelous Haiku ! Such sad imagery dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2019 at 8:48 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos March 16, 2019 at 2:33 PM Hi Anne-Lise, What a pretty pic! Clever words and contrast in your haiku soul sister! Crossing thumbs the snow melts quickly! You describe Spring as a princess - what a regal name for such a wonderful season! Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise, Poetry hugs, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2019 at 3:23 PM - Spring is a beautiful time ... "she" deserves a royal title :) - Nice to see you, many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, my soul sister :) - Enjoy the weekend :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2019 at 6:59 PM gorgeous picture! And also, it inspired in your a gem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2019 at 1:16 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit March 15, 2019 at 5:18 PM So well captured in your poem...I am amazed by that imagery, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2019 at 1:16 PM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper March 15, 2019 at 4:41 PM lovely haiku, I can see it clearly from the images you provide, Anne-Lise, enjoyed it Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2019 at 1:15 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Sheri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 15, 2019 at 4:01 PM ohh, enjoyed the contrast in your haiku, and congrats on your acrostic win, anne... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 4:34 PM - Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham March 15, 2019 at 2:50 PM Lovely image, let's hope your snow melts soon. Good luck. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 2:56 PM - The snow melts fast at this time of year, Tom ... "Princess Spring" will come, I just have to be patient :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 15, 2019 at 2:03 PM I think this lonely bud needs the type of sunshine only you can offer! Delightful haiku, hon, best wishes in Dear Heart's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 2:43 PM - The spring come next month ... I hope :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. March 15, 2019 at 1:27 PM Hi Anne-Lise, I enjoyed your take on the contest! Good imagery and contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2019 at 2:01 PM - Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)